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The Phases of my Life
This is a place I'm going to be putting up most of my poems, no one has to read them but if you do I would really like to know what you think of them. If you could please leave a comment or message me about it I would be thankful.
Lovers Ball (poem)
every day
at this time
at this place
they come together
to celebrate
its the all night ball
from one to eight
where lovers from all around
in any town
flying down
fluttering around
gathering here
in this hour
bloody midnight
this time
this place
is all for fun
until the silent dawn






User Comments: [2]
Abby The Odd
Community Member





Mon Sep 29, 2008 @ 12:12am


(First post W00T)

Aww... non depressing! ish.

=} I like your poems... And I usually don't like non-rhyming poems...


lovley girl45
Community Member





Mon Sep 29, 2008 @ 06:35pm


i like it! you should write happy poems! that make you happy! domokun biggrin domokun biggrin domokun biggrin
i cant believe they toook out the domo they show it here but they wont preview it look!!


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