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A story I was working on, I don't know if I'll have time anymore, Read if you want. Tell me what you think. Not idea what those entries on my profile are (just a glitch I guess ) just click VIEW JOURNAL.
Chapter 8

The driveway curved up the road and was partly surrounded by trees so you could barely see the house from the main road on a clear day but still you could tell even with the trees blocking the view that the house was beautiful.

The Corvex family was well influenced and always had money to burn so naturally the house was gorgeous. I think I have to correct myself it wasn't really a house more like a manor, something you wouldn't expect to see around here. It wasn't huge just big, it had a covered porch at the front the house inside was white with dark green shutters and a dark green roof. I'm would go into further description about the house but what was amazing was the view. Since the house was on a hill over looking the whole town, the mountains in the background, the stormy sky, and the green of the trees made it all so beautiful, in a creepy way. It also helped that I had a slight glance at Xander's face the whole time.

We pulled the car up to the front of house and suddenly the house gave me the creeps. It wasn't cause of the wind or the lightning and thunder, or the creek of the steps as Xander lead me onto the porch. It's cause I was about to enter the house of the guy I liked and I had a feeling that his parents weren't home at all. I'm 17 and it's sad to admit it but I have never been over to a guy's house before. I mean I had friends in Middle School and I went to their houses and they had brothers but this is different, this is Xander Corvex's house!

"Come on in"
With a grin Xander invited me into his house.

"Ah..Ok."
Why can't I just be cool around him!?

It seems like all my confidence just flies out the window when I see him, I had very little in the first place but still. And now I've been lured into his house, he said he is in love with me maybe he justs wants sex? Well I wouldn't mean I've been having erotic dreams about it. AH! I sound like a slut at least we can go on a few dates first then play time. This isn't the time to be thinking dirty thoughts he's been talking to me the whole time and I've been zoning out.

"Sidney?"
Waving his hand in front of my face.
"You awake?"
He pats my cheek a little.

"Yeah!"
I blush and look at the floor.

"Well....like I was saying while you were zoning out..you like the house?"
He was smiling again. And he seemed more willing to talk than usual.

"Yes..it's beautiful...way better than my little house."
Yeah, my dad is a teacher doesn't pay to well even if he works at a private school.

"Well lets find my sister first and get you a change of clothes."
He started heading up the stairs. While I realize he might have become more talkative and looking in different directions the whole time because my bra was exposed. Clutching my arms over my chest I followed him up the steps. I hope this doesn't turn out bad.






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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 01:38am
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