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Sins of the Gods

The legacy of the embodiment of the original sins.



Chapter 1 Dawn The sky was blood red when i realized it..... I awoke with her in my arms.... In the old cathedral,i was covered in her blood.... He lay dead at the altar.... The last of my kind.... I was the fourth sin.... I close my eyes and wish for my suffering to end.... I reopen my eyes and kiss her forehead one last time.... My name was Alexander.... Pride is my true name.... I am an abomination of the Gods.

Posted by: xXxZombehxXx Sun Aug 17, 2008 @ 03:42am

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Daily Night
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Commented on: Sun Aug 17, 2008 @ 04:25am


	How peculiar... I find the first part to be a bit split, meaning, I don't know at all what's going on, and the second part was better in that regard. But for some reason, I like the first half better than the second. I guess it's because I like the descriptions better. About the way you write it, it's rather good, and you can make it better.

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