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Avatar_Aiko
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this poem was inspired by vampire knight and NANA! ^^

The Still Doll:

I reach into the sky to find the stars,
abandoning my hope and I.
Tangled in branches of sorrow and pain,
I struggled to give into hate.
Eyes watching me suffer from the distance,
Hands ready to turn me away.
Chained to my thoughts that bury me alive,
I scream for help "SAVE ME FROM MYSELF!"
The key i possess to release my soul,
unable to find the right door.
Weeping tears of blood in self-pity,
as white fands glisten in a smile.
Warm and Gentle his hand awaiting mine,
his lips forming words of kindness.
"take my hand - i will guide you to freedom,
cut loose from your chains, break free from your cage!"





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Bittersweet Candycorn
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comment Commented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 12:53pm
I like this one more than the other even though my specialty are love poems :3

anyways this one pulled my attention, to the fat of the name and the content.
the little caged doll reaches out for the person she needs thats all good but before that she hates herself and despises the fact that shes caged, but more important than being caged is that the cage itself are those feelings she has for that person (i may be wrong if i am plz correct me xD) so breaking free the fact that ur accepted looses ur soul into the light biggrin i liked the poem


comment Commented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 05:04pm
Nice biggrin n.n



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