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Golden Bird With Broken Wings
Golden bird with broken wings
Trapped in a cage
Spirit unbound but never to be free

Golden bird, wings clipped by forces unseen
I heard your song and came to see
Caught by the melody, calmed by the spirit
Unable to leave, I befriended the

Golden bird with song so sweet
You sang to me in my hour of need
Kept me sane, healed my pain
Helped me find what I couldn't see
My own set of wings, with them to be free

Golden bird, with love in your heart
You sing to me, pick me off my feet
Never fear but never near
Give me faith to do my part

Golden bird with beak now bound
Held tight by the hand that feeds
Never to fall never to want
But never to be free
Never will you be with me

Golden bird with dreams undone
Locked in your cage, my hope all but gone
Sing your song for all to hear
Return to the skies where you belong

Golden bird that I can't see
Sing me your song or set me free






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Taliauli
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 29, 2008 @ 08:35am
That's really good. I like it, a lot. heart


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 01:01am
Wow.. that's all that can be said to something like this... Wow.



ruby_red_wing
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Dark the Angel
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 03, 2008 @ 08:26am
One of the most beautiful yet bittersweet poems I've ever read. You have a real talent, doll, keep it up. heart


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 07, 2008 @ 07:47pm
Wow, that's beautiful. If you wrote this you have more skill than I gave you credit for. Keep it up, sweets, talent like that should never be kept inside.



Ristar Black
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Nyx Hemera
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 30, 2009 @ 03:40am
Oh wow, that's really good. n.n
For the only poem you've ever written, I'm very impressed.
It's lovely.


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 30, 2009 @ 04:37am
I like it! It's got both the lyric type beat and the haunting sort of wording. Very nice, sweet.



Mosholaitenraa v2
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xX Star Striker Xx
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 31, 2009 @ 01:11pm
That is one of the touching poems I have read. Nice work, a true meaning from the heart.


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