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The Asylum
I was wandering through the arenas and I came across this poem. It really spoke to me, because I can relate in some ways. Thank you, Feral Innocence, for letting me post this. (You can rate her poem here.)

"The Asylum"
By Feral Innocence

***

Amongst the forgotten,
Tendrils of shadow
Pour into my blackened mind.
P O I S O N.
Vague memories of
A life with smiles,
Of easy joy.

Back to agony,
Images lost on
My broken lips.
T H I R S T.
Skin chapped and broken
Arms locked inside
White-cotton insanity.

Bound by visions
They touch my
Crazily damaged smile.
P A I N.
Gentle touches, strokes
Meant to bring comfort,
Instead increasing agitation.

Bite back the scream
Wanting to break my chest.
The voices are taunting.
F E A R.
Candy coated promises
Followed by crimson tears
Little treats down a dry throat.

Insane sounding laughter,
Foreign to my ears and yet
So terribly, terribly familiar.
T H R E A T S.
They summon me,
Them with their wiles.
The sirens are calling!

Legs plastered together,
Laced by spasms and terror.
Picture their glee!
T O R T U R E.
Self inflicted contusions,
Little do they know
Voices are not so still.

Little cord of red,
Dangling like a medal
Before blood-shot eyes.
D E A T H.
An easy escape
They told me I'd
Be safe with them.

G A M E___O V E R






User Comments: [3]
i r JEDI
Community Member





Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 03:29am


You're welcome, I'm honored you related to my poem. smile

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Wraith_92
Community Member





Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 03:43am


It is a nice poem. It made my throat feel like it was stuffed with dry cotton.


Ai Song
Community Member





Wed Oct 29, 2008 @ 12:39am


Oooh, it's very nice :3 But, it makes me sad that you can relate to it... :`(


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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