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Kohana Nara
A story I'm working on. Please check out and tell me what you think!
Ch 1
"Aimi! Come on, leave the brat!" Iwao yelled as he escaped the crumbling house. Aimi, his wife, thought about it only for a second before fleeing the building as well. The toddler in the cradle cried loudly, wanting her mother or father to come. But they didn't and somehow Kohana knew they had left her. Anger posioned her young, innocent mind and her brown eyes glowed red.
They left you and they are gonna get what they deserved an evil voice came from inside her. The little girl did not question the voice and let a strange power wash over her. She didn't know what was happening but heard far off screams. Her eyes widened at the noise. Had she done that? she thought.
The power left her weak and she quickly fell asleep. She woke up to find her house fallen around her. "MOMMA! PAPA!" She yelled, hoping for a response. She didn't remeber what happened last night and was afraid. Kohana called out a few more times and got nothing.
She sat in her crib and wondered what to do. She was hungry and really had to go. The toddler got an idea and threw one side of her purple blanket over the crib, securing the other side to one of the bars.
She climbed down the blanket slowly but lost her grip and fell the last eleven inches.





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