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...My page to write whatever...
This is my page in which I write whatever I feel like writing, (as stated in title) this may consist of poems, random sayings, stories, and other things along those lines.
So lonely
Yeah I named it So Lonely for lack of a better idea. Really boring, but oh well. This is something that Shannon and I wrote, like I started, then she wrote something, and back and forth. I fixed it up a bit to (I'm picky about the way a poem flows). So tell me if you like it.

Down at the ocean she stands in the sand,
Stares at the water,
Waiting,
So sad,
Wishing she could just have a kiss,
Not by the tide,
Or the shadows on her skin,
But instead by soft lover's lips,
A flame for her empty heart,
Someone who would fit in.
The waves crashed against her legs,
She sighed and shivered,
In the lonely night,
Wishing someone was holding her then,
Not standing alone,
With only the sand and the tide.
She thought to herself,
The stars have each other,
Clustered in the sky,
My mother has my father,
And the sun has the moon,
They always seem so happy,
Together and free,
But I have no one and no one has me,
She cried to the ocean,
Why must it be?
She stood there so lonely,
On that cold empty beach,
Stood in the ocean,
Waiting for a good dream...


Okay, so it doesn't rhyme very well and stuff, its actually not very well written, but I still think its pretty in its own way...






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Serit
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 24, 2008 @ 10:12pm
Very pretty guys! It reminds me a lot of Kairi's struggle with Sora. (If you get what I mean! ...>_< wink


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 25, 2008 @ 08:04pm
I've got a basic idea.



Rhiine
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