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I have RP characters in here, Books i am or might write, Dream Avis and many other things.
Livinving for the one you love....
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Mike slowly walked into the forest listening to everything around him. The branches of the trees slightly moved with the wind. A blue bird quickly flew past his head for her nest of young birds. A small mouse ran under his feet from a bird finding its hole nearly escaping death. He heard all these sounds, but he couldn’t find the one he wanted.
He finally heard a small thump and soon after a running sound. He quickly turned about and grabbed his sister’s arm. ”Sam,” he said letting out a small breath of relief, ”I finally found you.” he smiled at her happily.
Samantha yanked her arm out of his grasp and began running away again. ”Leave me alone Michael" she yelled with a raspy voice. Mike quickly grabbed her arm again, holding tighter this time. She yanked again but couldn’t get out of his grip. Finally stopping she let out a sigh, ”How did you find me?” she asked not looking back at him.
He smiled, ”I am a vampire Sam, I can hear anything and everything. I can track a person’s scent, even a half vampire.” he said pulling her along with him. ”Now, let’s go home.” he looked back and smiled again still dragging her along against her will.
”No! Let me go, I do not want to go back there.” she planted her feet in the ground hopping to slow her brother down.
Mike stopped and sighed, ”Sammy, you just turned 16. Act your age and tell me why you’ve been acting weird.” he looked at her pleading letting his grip loosen on her wrist for only a second.




[[P.S~ As the title says, this is just a preview! If i get a few post to put up the real story then i will. But until then this is all you get lol ]]






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gakoma
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 04, 2008 @ 03:47am
well i see that it has improved quite a bit...its very better...Personally I would make a few other changes but tis your story razz


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 04, 2008 @ 04:31am
Thank you! ^^ It's just a preview of what the story will be sort of like. So I'm still fixing it up ^^



Taken_Life3
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odangohead
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 13, 2008 @ 06:27am
I like it. 3nodding


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