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i guess this will talk about what i am doing at the time like if something interesting happenes or i will write if i want to tell what i am feeling so i guess you could tell me what you think?! ok im new at this so be nice i will try to get this journal thing to work out with me so yea...enjoy!
first poem of the day...
well here is my poem! i thought hey everyone else does it why dont i...dont steal any of them or anything though...i put all my heart into these poems when i wrote them
but do tell me what you think!

My heart
it hurts so much
Its like a peice of glass
shattering before me
i want to cry
but i wont
becasue i love you
and i want you to be happy
i dont care that im not happy
while you are
i guess thats why
my hearts hurts so much
it is because i love you
and you love someone else...






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Leree
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 16, 2005 @ 12:34am
heart heart crying heart *luffles*


commentCommented on: Tue Oct 18, 2005 @ 12:56am
It may not be grammatically correct but there's a lot of feelings here... 3nodding
I believe poetry "in the moment" is the best of kinds...that way, your emotions live on, in the poem.
Whatever happened for this to be written, I wish you the best of luck, chibiruler. 3nodding



M-and-M-kun
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