their lies the valley of death,
the place where all dies,
until nothing is left,
im not a rap artist,
am a musician of rock,
a monster of metal,
for all time on the clock,
a poet of doom,
and a poet of life,
for the glory of peace,
and the edge of the knife,
this is me,
the god of the dead,
i shall lay you to rest,
in the eternal bed,
sorrow is blind,
no color it sees,
it lies behind corners,
and lives in the trees,
you asked for a rhyme,
you get this instead,
a message of darkness,
brought forth from the dead,
the moons shadow looming,
eclipsing the light,
darkness overflowing,
black covering white,
hell verses heaven,
the battle at hand,
as war and famine,
ravage your lands,
mortals kill mortals,
their family and friends,
they bring forth destruction,
they cause their own end,
is this what it is,
to be called mankind,
if so then my own path ill find,
your laws are useless,
as well as your rules,
the standard exceptions,
those are for the fools,
think outside,
of the unformed lines,
unlock the door,
and open your minds......
-chris luna
12/12/2008
10:13 am
X Rayver
LUNA C
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/general-discussion/out-rhyme-the-person-above-you/t.45741621_31/#36
rofl
rofl
rofl Dude that was amazing.
I wish I could rhyme like that...
lol, thanks X Rayver
mrgreen
Community Member
so ha!!
lol im going to make u look like a fairy you already have the dust =D