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A Vampyre Story
This is Raven Kijo's view of the working progress story of A vampires plan to get a 15 year old girl to fall in love with him....its kind of working
CHAPTER 01 - Graveyard wierdos' ~SAMPLE~
It was around midnight, or at least thats what it seemed like from how dark it was. I knew i was way late from being home, i was coming back from my best friend in the whole wide world, Sakura's, house, and i started running because i knew i was going to get busted for it...and belive me when i say I dont want to be in trouble, I remember the last time i got caught sneaking in the house and it was 3 o' clock in the morning ~my father was waiting patiently on the bean bag with his Louis Ville Slugger, he gave me a beating I'll never forget...Man the memories bring tears to my eyes...Talk about blood thirsty beast, No s**t! You know that saying about the light at the end of the tunnel? I saw it! I'm so Dancer.<--What does that mean? i dont know so dont ask.~ So, i started running, i ran till i got to the graveyard, yes thats right, untill i got to Calaster's Graveyard...it brings chills to think about it...that old graveyard is so packed with spirits you can see theshadows everwhere you walk and not just from the trees, the way it has a goulish glow to every tombstone, so covered up with fog that you can hardley walk with the thought of getting lost in it. I did think twice, but it was the shortest way to get home, I thought so many times...finally i dont know what made me go but i went and i flew through it. I ran so hard i didnt feel that i was bleeding. it must have been from a tree or a bush i was distracted and then I felt like I was lost i was starting to run slower. That was probably not the best thing to do from what happened next. Some freak dressed all in black jumped in front of me, he scared the crap out of me. I almost cursed him out instead trying to be polite in the hope he wouldnt do anything to me i tell him,
"oh! You startled me." Then somthing that i didnt mean to say just poped out of my mouth, "You look like a Vampire, no offence!" He just smiled at me while i blushed.
"None taken, after all...I am a vampire." He quickly grabbed my arm as if he knew what i was thinking. I wanted to run, I wanted to get the hell out of there especially with that creep that thought he was a vampire. So i spoke, and sounded like a complete idiot.
"R-really?"
"Well, you tell me, I have Fangs, Unique Eyes, and Pale Skin, Those three say that clearly, Im a vampire."
"well sir thats nice to know, will you now let go of my arm?"
"no im afraid i cannot do that till i have a drink." Freak. He is a Freak, a drink? i looked at my arm noticing the blood from my cut i had got in the bushes earlier. Then his face, got closer to my arm. His fangs then slowly pierced into my wrist, oh the pain, i would tell you but i cant describe it, its deep and sharp, thats about all i can say and it lasted, it seemed to not end, and when it was finally over he slowly peirced them into my neck, this time i could hear him sucking out the blood, i looked at him through the corner of my eye and noticed his blood red eyes staring back at me. I felt sick, like i was going to faint from the pain. Just then a girl about my age, which was 15, came from the fog. He stopped and turned to her, he spoke in a language i couldnt understand. She seemed confussed when she looked at me i couldnt move and i was on the floor, suddenly the look changed from confusement to hate. I dont know why, but i didnt like the hate energy that she gave me and when i snapped out of my vegitable state I ran for my life. Then i dont know what happened but i fainted.
The next morning i woke up in my room. I felt an aching everywhere in my body. I felt like i couldnt move. So i layed my head back down on my pillow and knocked out again.
"RAVEN GET YOUR a** DOWN HERE! ITS TIME TO GO TO SCHOOL!" brutally screamed my mom.
"Coming MOM," I moaned. I unwillingly got up, got dressed, walked down the stairs, sat down at the table, it was the same every morning. Only today was different when i sat at the table. I served my self Count Chocula Cereal, I noticed my dad staring at me in a wierd manner(no pervert), so i sorta covered my neck for a strange reason.
"Raven...What have i told you about boys?"
"Huh? What do you mean dad?"
"You know damn well what i mean, now answer this, Whats that on your neck? Because it looks like Some boy gave you a hickie, and belive me when i say i will track im down and beat him to a pulp." I had no idea what my dad was talking about, suddenly the doorbell rang. "I'll be right back raven, and then we will have this talk." He went and attended the doorbell. he answered it to one of the newspaper boys which i thought was kinda cute, and usually he would give me discounts on all the newspapers i bought from him just cause he said he liked me, How cute is that?. Well any ways, My dad answered the door and he yelled, "WAS THIS HIM?" I just stared at my dad like if he was on crack or somthing. "IT WAS WASNT IT?!?!" Then he looked at the newspaperboy and picked up his Louisville Slugger Bat. "Boy you better run before i catch you." Well there goes that poor kid, my dad chased him and that boy ran for it dropping his newspapers behind.
"Mom,I think im going to got to school now."
"Okay honey, Bye!"
(End of chapter 01, Sample Novel) (ask if you want me to send you more, You need to suscribe with me in order for me to send you more)





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