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A place to let my emotions out.... my poems.... my hyperness.... anything really so it's just a place for randomness i guess. XD ^^;;
Another Poem
This one, I wrote when I was sick..... ^^;; sorry no emotional breakdowns this time.... I felt really bad and I just wanted to write it as a poem:

Flames of Hell
is like the ring of a Bell.
The sight & sound of lies
makes you very hypnotized.

The Flames & Bells
makes you tortured in Hell.
From the inside out you bleed
your remains is what you will leave.


I personally like this one alot.... it just stands out to me.... even if it's short, it doesn't have to be lowest.... like me....






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Kudarugi Yamafutago
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 08, 2009 @ 10:09pm
The Ring of a Bell
Can't compare to this cell called hell,
An eternity of fire,
the place for all Lairs,
I know People who will end up in Hell for the sins they commit everyday
Unfortunately all men must pay for there transactions.
It Doesn't matter what form or faction.
Hell does not torture us we do, We torture are selves when we turn against God.
Does no one Think it odd
that every generation becomes more wicked then the first. Not only are Sins but
those of are ancestors cause us pain,
and it is in the rain of pain we find are selves.
Its not hell your going through its merely a storm a shower
helping you to become the flower you are meant to be.
Right now the pain might be intense.
might seem as if it makes no sence.
But your not in Hell


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 08, 2009 @ 10:10pm
I am merely a Philosopher please forgive me If my Poem isn't as good as yours.



Kudarugi Yamafutago
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