Okay. To have some things in my story i'm going to have to change the begining. Its goign to still be from the current main char's point of view but at times it will shift(as it has done once before.) This will usualy be third person so there won't be confusion of that kind. But I have to explain how thats there so...i'm going to type up a new intro explaining how the Scribe searched for more information after getting it from the main char. This would allow for the first person view still but it would allow me to do the whole 'third person view thingy' to explain more(i'm starting to wish I had wrote the whole thing from third person and i might end up changing it to that once i write the whole thing just to make it easier but i might not. I do like the feel of first person even if it causes a few problems...) So I want everyones option on this! And go here -->
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