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ificaunts adventure
a story about a man who is dead now story made long ago in my mind still remembering the quest new characters will come soon just wait
ch 1 boring before the storm
i went to school like a normal kid neutral in a cruddy town called layshire well it actualy wasnt cruddy but most people thought it was. I went with my little bro and sis caboicant and sereneicant. we went to our useal classes of math social studies language arts all that crap and went to recess were bullys picked on my sis and bro and i came to beat the living crap out of them and get detention and they would wait for me till im out so we can go home.and our parents would be worried sick about my sis and bro and get really pissed off at me evil and i would get a lecture or get grounded for my punishment and go to bed without my food. then my mom would sooner or later wake me up and give me my food and leave me alone and go back to bed.i started walking home alone to school cause my parents picked up my bro and sis it was very lonely but i didnt care just then i heard gunshots in a alley. i went to go see what was happening i saw about a dozen people fighting with swords and guns one team was losing wore body armor that was all black the others were wearing white body armor with black and white helmets. the people that were losing were unorganized and losing people fast they were all unorganized except 1 who seemed to have a tail i think. he had a cloak that was all dark and used a sword that i cant even describe it but he sure was a brave warrior but they lost the battle and retreated i dont know were they went but there were like 3 people that were dead and then i heard sirens the cops were coming i left but something caught my eye. there was a strange black amulet on one of the dead corpse so i went to the corpse and got the amulet and got the heck out of there before the cops came. while i was walking home the cloaked man i saw with the sword found me and told me to follow him i had no choice for his sword was pointed at me he asked me if my name was ifficant i answerd truthfully and said yes. he told me that i was in great danger cause the town was about to get destroyed i was in shock and i didnt beleive him he told me to go and find a guy who will escort me safely out of town i told him im not leaving my home town even if it was about to get destroyed which i thought this guy is crazy so i just ran away he tryed to stop me but he failed. after awhile of wandering around a man with a helmet and black body armor appeared and asked if i were ifficant i was begining to wonder how did all these people know my name. i asked him if he were the guy that the cloaked man said for me to find.he was silent for a couple minutes then said look i need you to leave this town and never come back i dont know but for some reason i could trust him and then out of nowhere the cloaked man attacked us . i was dazed but when i regained consience i was in a warehouse with alot of people everywhere at windows with high powerd weaponry at the doors with swords and shields the whole entire place was heavily guarded . a girl that was right next to me asked me if i were ok i answerd my head feels like a racket ball. just then doors burst open and the windows were shatterd as if a great force came and blew it down just then 10 figures came all dressed in white robes with different weapons each. the guards started attacking them but it had no effect like some kind of shield was protecting them.then 5 guards went straight at them charging with melee weapons in hand and attacked them. i was lifted up and taken to the back door where a jeep with a gun on the back was waiting to leave. there were only two people in it one was a guard with basic black armor was on the gunner position and the other was the guy that saved me in the driver position.there was only room for one more person in the passenger seat which i got into the passenger seat and asked if she was coming with us she said i have to stay and help my men before they all die but dont worry my husband will make sure you get out of here safely. and with that we started to drive away we made only one stop the guy that was driving switched places with a diffrent person i asked where are you going i have to help my wife before anything happens to her dont worry though our paths will cross again and maybe will even be on the opposite end. and off i drove with two guards escorting me out of town. later on a hill 5 miles away from the city i watched as my home town get destroyed in front of my own eyes. and on that moment i knew i was alone.end of chapter one






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The Grace Of Rain
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 16, 2009 @ 08:49am
its REALLY good! keep on working on it


commentCommented on: Sun May 31, 2009 @ 08:32pm
nice dude



soul eater7
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