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Bre J's Journal/Poems/Stories ummmm well im starting to write so when i put something down, plz read and tell me if it's good. thnx 4 caring......


Donkey Muncher
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The Darkness
The Darkness
My life is a dying rose bud,
Crippled and frail,
In the center of loneliness,
Waiting for someone to notice

My Heart is afflicted with sorrow and depression,
Why do I feel this way?
I'm just a soul, wandering
In this world of darkness,

I feel like I've been
Swallowed up by temptation,
And consumed by hell
Is there anyone out there?

Please give me something,
Anything,
A sigh, a prayer, a vision
I reach out, but nothing catches me

Someone please! Keep me from
Falling through the stitches,
I'm so lost and captivated
By the claws of this monster

The suffering is getting unbearable...
Oh God! Save me!






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X_ikittylover_X
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comment Commented on: Sun Mar 15, 2009 @ 06:36pm
nice .....
no one had said anything to me!! cry crying crying It's my birthday!! crying crying crying crying crying


comment Commented on: Sun Mar 15, 2009 @ 08:52pm
its geart you got some talent in poetery but ya nice.



nitris15
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luna quetzal
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comment Commented on: Tue Jun 16, 2009 @ 09:36pm
You really do have some talent.


comment Commented on: Thu Jun 18, 2009 @ 08:07am
this one is my favorite. they're all really good too. mrgreen



ATR fan vip3r20
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