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Bre J's Journal/Poems/Stories ummmm well im starting to write so when i put something down, plz read and tell me if it's good. thnx 4 caring......

Donkey Muncher
Community Member
Open Wonds
Insanity begins,
I keep it all inside,
Until the wound is cut,
Crimson liquid melts down my arm
As the sickle of the blade pierces skin,
Releases the monster,
At last, the scream,
The pain,
The blood,
The urge that comes and comes again
Has vanished.
Panic arises as I stare,
The drips of delusion leaves my aching heart,
To much to bare,
The deed is done,
No turning back,
Death has won...

User Comments: [2]
luna quetzal
Community Member
comment Commented on: Tue Aug 25, 2009 @ 12:33am
Oh my God. I think you're amazing at writing poems.You have real talent. I wish I was like you. D:

comment Commented on: Tue Aug 25, 2009 @ 03:12am
I have never writtin a comment for anyones journals before untill now u have amazing writing talent im jealous

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