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A bunch of random stuff
Poem 1
Forgotten

I seem to feel forgotten
untouched by the wind

untouched by the darkness
untouched by my sin

I felt no one
could feel the pain that was true

until i realized
you could feel it too






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toxkillfraex
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 19, 2005 @ 06:13pm
auw.. di i just feel that one domokun


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 19, 2005 @ 06:14pm
Nice. Just correct 'releized' to 'realized' ^.^ I like it.



the o a k i e f a c t o r
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baseballman3
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 20, 2005 @ 04:26pm
it's good


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 20, 2005 @ 04:44pm
thanks for all your kind words on my second poem



Korjen
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kylov
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 24, 2005 @ 02:00am
That was cool.


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 29, 2005 @ 02:10am
Nice 3nodding



xSartana
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Escaping Misery
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 01, 2005 @ 11:15pm
I'm speechless! That's just too cool! I love it. whee


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 10, 2005 @ 03:12pm
wow, thats really good^^



Angelic Story Teller
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Korjen
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 13, 2005 @ 02:23am
thank you all ^^


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