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My Thoughts::
These are just some of my poems and thoughts on things that ive gone through and/or am going through. Hope you enjoy them, and feel free to comment and PM me about them. <3
Tonight:My Angel
A shadow is chasing
My joys now erasing
Im facing my problems, tonight.

So many problems
I cant seem to stop them
I need my angel to fight.

My Angel protects me
She love's me and guides me
I've sworn to her now my life
My Angel forever
My Angel forever
My Guardian Angel take flight

It's the same routine
Only stopped for the screams
Of my heart as it bleeds, tonight.

Will it catch me and break me
Consume me and Take me
Or will my Angel now show her light.

My Angel protects me
She love's me and guides me
I've sworn to her now my life
My Angel forever
My Angel forever
My Guardian Angel take flight

Someone come save me
Im cold and im shaking
My heart is now breaking, tonight.

It's a consuming pain
All my efforts in vain
Has my Angel lost all of her might?

My Angel protects me
She love's me and guides me
I've sworn to her now my life
My Angel forever
My Angel forever
My Guardian Angel take flight

Even laying here shaken
Been broken and taken
The shadow is on me, tonight.

I'll take up the sword
Cause I've given my word
And i'll fight to the death for her now.






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Vampire Naito
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 24, 2005 @ 03:29am
crying very very good
I like bunches ^_^ *Apaludes*


commentCommented on: Thu Feb 16, 2006 @ 04:20pm
i understand what ur saying threw this poem and i know exactly what ur filling. because i've gone threw the same thing. to me it was truely beautiful i'm glad that i'm not alone in my suffering.



rogue390
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Mr. Fuzzy Wuzzy
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 02, 2007 @ 12:11pm
O:

I must applaud you for your amazing use of imagery... Not many people can pull off the beautiful morbid poetry.. They usually go to overboard and sound like an angsty suicidal teen, but in all your work, you balanced it perfectly!!

Ehehe sorry I'm all detailed about my comment, I just am kinda a poet myself, and I really admire your work...

<33

Keep it up bby.

^o^


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