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Dieing a broken heart (poem Every time my heart makes a beat It feels like the ground trembles beneth my feet I clinch it hard as I cry Hoping that I will die Feeling rejected and alone I write my sadness in stone Seeing her with him My eyes bleed with grim As I feel my heart breaking down I then fall to the ground I tell myself "if only she was mine" Then for the last time, I close my eyes Then with my last breath I got the kiss of death

Posted by: MatsufubuxX Fri Nov 25, 2005 @ 01:27am

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Commented on: Fri Nov 25, 2005 @ 01:37am


	...... you werent kidding when you said that was sad. Though Sweetie..... might I ask who that was about?..........

Commented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 11:03am

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Akida Uchiha2
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Commented on: Mon Nov 19, 2007 @ 03:37am


	beautiful poem Takkun! ^-^ p.s. hi ~Akida-chan ^-^ mmm...ramen! n.n

Commented on: Fri Apr 18, 2008 @ 09:37pm


	Whoa... 'Every time my heart makes a beat I tremble beneth my feet' I think you should take out "beneath my feet." It will make it sound better and I thought, "How can someone do that?" I don't think a person can tremble beneath their feet...lol...^_^

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