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This is where I hold my personal problems and poems/songs Ive written. Enjoy!
I love you daddy
I LOVE YOU DADDY

When my father died
I was just a little girl
I was twelve years old
and in a great world

He is closer to me
than ever before
but my tears are pouring
even more and more

He was a great father to me
and he always will
He worked his hardest
and became ill

He fought and he fought
‘til he collapsed
then it was time
for him to pass

He is watching over us
and wondering why
He doesn’t want to see us
in pain and crying

I wish he was alive so
I could give him a hug
I tug and I tug and
I tug and I tug

I would hang on to him
as long as I could
Or at least hang on to him
as long as I should

I’d tell him I love him
and don’t want to leave
I’d tell him I’d make him proud
and that I would follow my dreams.


There’s a place in my heart
where he can stay
never be apart
or never away

I see him
in my eyes and mind
but when I see him in my heart
He is always behind

and when I turn my head
and he’s there
I turn my head again
and he is everywhere

Now I know he’s
in a good place
running and jumping joyfully
in his own space

So I just want to tell him
I love you Daddy
I’ll try to tell him
happy and gladly

I know he’s in heaven
in his own little world
and I know he’s watching
his little girl

So I bring this poem to an end
for you will all see
I miss my Daddy with all my heart
and you know I love my Daddy



Love your baby girl,
Helen Tang <span id="test27040355">. . .</span><br/><div id="post27040355" style="display:none; margin-right:75px;"> </div>








User Comments: [2]
doyouthinkimpretty-lol
Community Member





Wed Jun 17, 2009 @ 07:16am


awww that is so sad and ur a really good writer

i like to write songs too but im not as good as u


Live Life To The Fullest Or You'll regret It Later - Olivia Potts
M e l i s a u r u s REX
Community Member





Thu Jun 18, 2009 @ 06:05am


That was really sad. I am so sorry about your father Torch.
BUt you have a gift in writing(:


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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