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In English class we had to write out a short paragraph based upon the word lost this was what i wrote

His matted chestnut brown hair cascaded down his face covering his milky white eyes. A can tapped along listening to the sounds, feeling for the movements. Lost in the deep dark abyss of his blindness, all he could do was move forward. This blindness was like walking in a pitch black labyrinth, feeling around those walls, hoping for a way out. For him though there was more than one Minotaur. For him, they were all around him. He was lost among the bodies, his own personal ocean. Every movement he took, those dark murky water would crash against him in a swirl of cologne and cheap perfume.This was all because one person had decided to make a moronic mistake that he had to pay. Because someone drove their car drunk, he had to forfeit his sight. When it came to paying the piper the driver had got away scott free. Now he was lost in his own eternal night, where light dared not travel.






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kiimma
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 08, 2009 @ 03:24am
this is hella good(: i like it


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