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Well, because I have not written in a very long time, I feel like writing again! And this time I don't really feel like being lazy and just adding a picture/poem, I actually feel like talking! Right now I'm in a really good mood for some reason, though I think it was the amazing pancakes I had for breakfast! ^_^ heart Ah... pancakes and milk... perfect! Also I had a really weird dream last night, but I think one of the weirder parts was when I was rolling down a snow hill that used to be my school's ramp! XD It was really fun, though, and after that my school cafeteria had been completely transformed so there was a soda machine, pies on a stand that had everything from apple to peach to cherry to chocolate, muffins, pot roast, fresh-made baked beans... Oh heaven... *o* Plus they let us come back for seconds and the lines didn't take very long! X3 Onto a different subject since this is only making me hungry, my mom got me hooked on one of her book series that's about a woman who is in a lot of debts, so she works as a bounty hunter to get money. o_o It's called One for the Money from the Stephanie Plum series.... sweatdrop Anyways! My ideas are slowly diminishing- OH!!!!! Quick heads-up, I'm going to be gone on a trip from the 15th to the 22nd so don't think I died or something! XD I guess I didn't tell one of my friends and they got really mad at me..... sweatdrop My fault... Hoe dan ook! (I had to think of something other than anyways!) Once again my ideas are slowly being forgotten... hmm... well I guess I could talk about the weather since that's ALWAYS a lovely subject, especially after a storm! ^_^ Last Tuesday, the day started out fairly rainy, then became a HUGE storm with rain pouring buckets and wind that was incredibly strong and blew the rain absolutely EVERYWHERE!!!! X3 Ah... lovely, lovely... :3 Wouldn't you agree? I'm absolutely stunned right now at how much I've written... I guess not writing for a while makes my need to write build! Which means I should write some more in my book... Hey, there's an idea! I'm going to show you the first tiny bit of my book! ^_^ It's only a little bit since... that would be a lot if I tried to put everything I have... sweatdrop So, here ya go! ^_^

A Wonderful Hell


I sang loud and clear the notes my mother taught me, and shed the tears my father gave. They were both entirely incidental; mother would sing herself a sad song every night just to get to sleep, and I watched. Father talked on the phone a lot to his old friends and family. The only time anyone ever called was when someone died, and I watched this, too. We lived a lonely life, not at all poor, but simply cut off from everyone else. I had no human friends, only dogs and birds, and mother and father were sick every other week. My family didn’t like this lifestyle at all, but never tried to change it. Eventually, we just got used to it and lived our lives alone, happy simply to have each other.
Then, when I turned fourteen, my parents caught an unknown virus and died. It was only me after that, so I went off and lived with my last remaining family member. That’s where everything changed, and I would never see my old life again.

Magnificent mountains loomed above me as I stared out the window. The rocky side covered in trees and other various plants reminded me of how amazing nature could be.
“Aren’t they beautiful, Miss Dersi? The thriving wildlife never cease to amaze me,” A young man of about nineteen commented as he drove through curving roads and up the mountains.
“Please, just call me Sri Lana. Miss Dersi makes me feel like a porcelain doll,” I replied in a monotone voice.
At the time, I was being driven to my Aunt Marsie’s house, where I would be living alone with her. Her house was up high in the Rocky Mountains, Colorado, and the closest town was Estes Park, so we still had a ways to go. Once I was there, the man would drop me off, along with all my things in the truck behind us, and leave. Fairly simple, as long as we made in on time.
“So have you been here before?” he asked to try and start some conversation.
“No,” I answered bluntly.
“Have you ever been away from your home?”
“A bit.”
“Where did you go?”
“Places.”
The man sighed in defeat and stayed silent the rest of the drive.
My eyes wandered along the rocks in front of me and occasionally I’d see a bird or two, but not many animals dared come towards the busy road. After a while, though, they opened up to fields hidden amongst the giant mountains, and many more creatures came into view. Herds of elk, a few deer now and then, birds of all shapes and sizes; It was so interesting seeing the different creatures living in this unknown landscape.
We entered a beautiful town and kept going, once again entering the mountains. This time, the road was steeper and had many more curves. I was told earlier that we’d arrive around eight or nine p.m., so there was only about an hour or two left.
I fell asleep and dreamed of back home, mother reading a book in the living room and father feeding our two dogs, Holly and Sky. It must have been a while ago, because Holly and Sky both ran away when I was eleven. I was sitting on the couch watching them, when Holly came over and nudged my hand. Her playful bark brought a smile to my face, and I slid to the ground to play with her. Sky, as usual, wiggled her way in and licked my face. I laughed and threw her ball, and she bounded after it. Then she was gone. Holly saw her ‘sister’ run away and ran after her. Father heard the phone ring and walked off to answer it. I tried to tell mother not to go, but she just smiled and disappeared. Alone; that’s how I’d always be. I couldn’t even cry anymore, so my body simply fell over and sank into the darkness, where I could stop feeling the pain…
“Sri Lana…”
What?
“Sri Lana…”
What do you need from me?
“Sri Lana…”
The last voice had been a lady, and as I opened my eyes cautiously, Aunt Marsie stood above me, smiling down.
“Welcome home, Sri Lana!”


So there's my first little section of book. I hope you liked it! And now, as I feel that my entry is long enough, I shall end here and say thank you, bilo, and ik houd van u! ^_^ heart






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h2ozaki
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 11, 2009 @ 09:05pm
Damn. That's a lot of typing.


commentCommented on: Thu Jun 11, 2009 @ 09:07pm
Mmm..... 0.0

I think around the time yuu get back I may be away at my sister's wedding. 0.0
I'm still trying to decide a date for my birthday party.. I wanna plan around the probable period dates so we can swim...stupid female bodily functions. D:< And one of my adorable friends will be in the Philippines. >.<

Ack..I haven't read much in awhile...I need to find a good book to distract myself. I feel like I'm wasting away.. o_o

I'm not sure if it's just me or the small text, but the first paragraph about the old life seems so short. Would we need more introduction about the character's past or maybe we just keep it brief and can wait and see more important parts that are referred to later...?
But I dunno. That's just my opinion. o_O
Hmm... At the moment things seem to be pretty peaceful, and a bit gloomy. And maybe something else that I can't think of a word for at the moment. o.o
I love the description though. It paints a nice picture in my head. o:



One Rainy Night
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Mr Elton John
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 13, 2009 @ 11:51pm
Kat that story is beautiful. I definitely love the isolation aspect, I write like that all the time and I always thought I was just messed up. Thanks for making me feel normal! Its so sad, you know? The whole first paragraph reminded me of something I would write... And the whole Holly and Sky thing, I know they're real but there's one part that freaked me out: Then she was gone. Holly saw her sister run away and ran after her. That's what happened to my kittens! (metaphorically speaking). Maggie got eaten by a bobcat and Muggy, who witnessed it, literally went insane and had to be put down. Muggy saw her sister run away and ran after her........

Oh and I think its funny that her aunt's name is Marsie since that's the name you told me to use for that storm story I gave up on last year. Still can't get them out of the forest...

Seriously, this story is pretty great. Its like Anne of Green Gables... with a dark side. Mwa haha.... (?)

Just one problem, and I've said this before: Sri Lana is one letter away from Sri Lanka, which just happens to be an island nation that got hit by a tsunami that killed thousands. But whatever. I'm just weird for knowing things like that. Keep writing, and then publish!


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 13, 2009 @ 11:52pm
Oh and Lacee the word you're looking for is "melancholy" (:



Mr Elton John
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