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Bre J's Journal/Poems/Stories ummmm well im starting to write so when i put something down, plz read and tell me if it's good. thnx 4 caring......


Donkey Muncher
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Dark Thoughts
Dark Thoughts

Ghostly powdered words whisper to me
In the back of my head,
It won't leave me,
Breaking the peace of my thoughts,
And torments me,
I hate it, yet, I love it

In the darkness, it pushes me forward,
As it takes over my freedom,
The smell of death welcomes me
As I listen to it's lies,
I fear it, yet, I love it

Its keeps me awake
Sunset to rise,
Laying in the sheets of guilt for hours,
I cry out,
But is smothered by it's silence,
Envy shadows cower over my heart,
Squeezing out my last breath,
And imprisons my soul,
I've forgotten how to love this dark thought...
...I loathe it...






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luna quetzal
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comment Commented on: Thu Jun 18, 2009 @ 07:33am
I love this one, every deep.


comment Commented on: Thu Jun 18, 2009 @ 07:36am
hey thnx! its how i feel tho....



Donkey Muncher
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AmandaRose_1996
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 26, 2009 @ 05:41am
That poem left me confused yet strangly satisfied
you should enter a poem contest
i really liked it it had a emo twist to it


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