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soichiro16 little story.
hi if you already didn't know i am soiciro16. Big fan of reading and i thought i'd give writing a shot.This is my first time writing anything just for myself so feel free to criticize i need to know whats wrong and whats right. hope you enjoy.

DEMONIC LAUGH. "HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAHAAHAHHAAAAAAAAA"

Idatei "NO LEAVE THEM ALONE!!!! NO STOP NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

All of a sudden the boy wakes to a room unfamiliar to him beads of sweat run down his face, and a cold chill run up his back. The boy sits and wonders.

Idatei " (was that all just a dream)" as the boy ponders this, a women comes into the room.

Mrs.Takeda "well finally awake i see...... you had us worried there".

Idatei "where....... just exactly were am i', the boy gives a puzzled look," last thing i remember i was in my backyard and blacked out".

Mrs.Takeda " What you mean you dont remember walking out of the house at all"

Idatei " look lady, all i remember is passing out in the backyard. and some girl stopping me from catching my parents killer.

Mrs.Takeda " hmm that's strange cause we found you in your front yard crawling to the curb asking for help."

Idatei. "(did that girl drag me out of the fire ) are you sure that's where you found me.

Mrs. Takeda " yes, as soon as we found you we took you to the hospital.... they treated your wounds and said you can take him home".

Idatei, " why would they allow you to take me home........why didn't they keep me for questioning or to talk about what had happened."

Mrs. Takeda " Well... to tell you the truth they thought that it would be better if you had somewhere you could stay so i volunteered."

Idatei : i see,..... well thank you for letting me stay here but,..... and for saving me but i have someone to search for."

Mrs. Takeda " who??

Idatei. " didn't you here me earlier I'm going after my parents murderer... and the girl who stopped me from going after him in the first place.

The boy grabs the lunch the woman has made for him and the jacket hat he was found in. he heads for the door as the woman asks what a questions she already knows the answer to.

Mrs. Takeda " What will you do when you find the two that your looking for? "

Idatei. " What else kill both for the murder of my parents."

Mrs. Takeda " But the girl did nothing to you."

Idatei. " She let the b*****d get away, by holding on to me that is what she did. "

As the boy leaves the house the women eyes fill up with tears and she think of only one thing that replays in her head over and over again,

Mrs. Takeda "( please never let that boy find out i was lying, please never let him find my daughter.)

As the boy walks down the street with no money, no family, and no place to go he heads for the forest that is across the way from his house, the nature f his eyes change from peaceful to the eyes of a wild dog hunting for his prey, as he enters the forest all he can hear is the maniacal laughter of that brutal murderer and and the smell of burning wood from the ashes of what was once his happiest place full of his most precious memories,and the only feeling this boy has in his heart is one of loneliness and hatred.





 
 
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