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If you are near to the dark I will tell you 'bout the sun You are here, no escape From my visions of the world You will cry all alone But it does not mean a thing to me Knowing the song I will sing Till the darkness comes to sleep Come to m
No Title give me an idea for this poem

A stranger you were once.
Then, with a gentle look you took my hand.
As our lives engaged,
you lit my life and I held both your hands.
Now that decades have passed,
ours souls have indeed become one.
How fortunate we are
that we have found the love so true
that everyone dreams about.

But hardly that was the pass and you found
another my heart is still with you what would i do.
I love you so but your wedding is soon
I don't know what to do
could someone give me a sign
anybody will be find a friend a stranger even my mom
just give me answer........




Please comment on this poem you could finish this if you like tell me what 2 do and i finish this poem
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rachelmvy
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 30, 2009 @ 07:30am
Hm. this is a good start. Maybe you can uhm like think about somebody you care/like about and then write about that on how you feel and stuff. Idk i just ran out of ideas.


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 30, 2009 @ 07:51am
i love you babe heart heart



big cuteypie
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