Artificial Angel
Type: Fantasy, Romance, War, Drama
Story:
The world of Procyon has darkened from humanity's sins. All elements of the world has exhalted power from it's soul, causing the life of man to slowly fade away. The main source of evil, Deimos, even in death pulls the world down to nothingness.
At the highest point of darkness, a savior is sent from the heavens to regain order to the world. To liberate the world from darkness that the world has caused itself and regain the paradise of light. To rid the world of evil who captivates the innocent is the savior's dutie.
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Characters:
Crucis - A man born from the world's last Savior, Merceros. His born dutie is to lead the creatures, Phaets, as an independent and educated group to keep the world in order, from his father's words. However, he refuses to do so, and instead would take more of a risk to demolish Deimos, the main source of evil. Nobody believes that Crucis can actually be the savior of Procyon. High lords and common people believe that he is insane. (Supposedly Highest Lord - Rules "Pullox", half of the world.)
Corvus - Twin brother of Crucis. He is the strong one out of the twin birth. His born dutie is to lead the creatures, Phacts, as an independent and educated group of souls. He successfully does so, but secretly he fights to demolish Deimos. (Highest Lord - Most Respected - Rules "Zuben", half of the world.)
Polaris - An elf that was banned from her land because she had fought for her rights as a woman. After accidentally finding Crucis, she believed that he really is Procyon's savior, despite his actions and attitude.
Deimos, Crocell and Merceros - The three Saviors of Procyon, Sirius and Canopus. A thousand years ago before the age of the dark times, they were sent from the heavens to regain order to the three corrupted worlds of sin. Deimos was to purify all broken souls, Merceros was to send the dead to where they belong and Crocell was to discapline the world and tell them what went wrong and what should go right. They all failed to do so, after Deimos had mysteriously gone insane. Now known as "The Three Terrors"
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Other Information -
Andromeda - An industry that mutates prisoners and dead warriors into military war weapons. Harvests strong and well-built "recycled warriors". Creation derived from Deimos. Most lords of Procyon disagree with this industry, for some of the "Andromeda" seem to fight back.
Process of Andromeda -
- Mutates body into stronger life force
- Deletes all useless memories
- Infuses with artificial cells of Deimos
- 1 year long process
Crocell Clones - 4 clones of Crocell himself that holds the broken spirit of Deimos. Their dutie is to destroy Crucis and Corvus from bannishing Deimos into an abyss.
Crocell Clone Bio -
- Hallucination = 1st clone. "Head of Deimos"
- Lucin = 2nd clone. "Body & Arms of Deimos"
- Anicu = 3rd clone. "Wings of Deimos"
- Alluc = 4th clone. "Legs of Deimos"
Shadowlynns - Dead bodies with spirits captivated inside. Without someone to send them to the land of the dead, they aimlessly search for light to find their "home". Some shadowlynns still have the memory to rebell and fight against Deimos, or fight those who are against Deimos. "Andromeda Soldiers" or "Sylphus Ressurections"
Sylphus - A ressurection art that was banned due to it's overuseage. Sylphus was created by a high savior before the "Three Terrors". After being used too much by the people who were taught this miracle, it's power began to fade, resulting a dead yet alive body. People who were resurrected by this are known as "Shadowlynns".
Chosen Phaets - Phaets that held enough spiritual energy to hold a peice of the shattered spirit of Merceros. If a Chosen Phaet were to be killed, a stone would take place of a small amount of blood to token powerful spiritual being. There are 26.
-Sirius
-Canopus
-Rigil Kent
-Arcturus
-Vega
-Capella
-Rigel
-Procyon
-Archenar
-Beteigeuse
-Hadar
-Altair
-Aldebaran
-Spica
-Antares
-Pollux
-Fomalhaut
-Deneb
-Mimosa
-Regulus
-Acrux
-Castor
-Gacrux
-Shaula
Three Worlds:
Procyon - World of Phaets and Phacts. Currently in the midst of darkness caused by Deimos. Deimos was sent from the heavens to purify this world. The sons of Merceros, Corvus and Crucis, now have the power to control this world.
- Phaets - Creatures that have these species: Merachs, elves, evods & animas
- Phacts - Creatures that have these species: Merachs, gorabs, achers & Phobas
Phaets are the creatures of light, Phacts are the creatures of the dark. This doesn't specify good or evil, for they are both, just as man.
Sirius - World of only Phaets. High world of light. The elements of Sirius and the atmosphere create it's own light, the power of the sun isn't needed for it. Most Phaets here are only the high lords of the species, Evods - The creatures with dove-like wings. Current ruler - Lady Angelise. Crocell was sent from the heavens to disapline this world.
Canopus - World of only Phacts. High world of darkness. Was once a world that held the highest lords of the Gorabs, creatures of crow-like wings. Merceros was sent from the heavens to send the dead from this world to where they belong. After Merceros's death, Deimos had completely destroyed this world, making it's last matter of only asteroids and dust. High lords no longer live, for they are either Shadowlynns or dead.
Spiral of Shadows - Place where the dead are meant to be placed. An unending spiral and abyss of dark shadow spirits called the Shadowlynns. A tunnel of no end, a tunnel of nightmare to those who have lived of sin. Once opened, shadowlynn sinners pour out, seeking revenge of their enemies.
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OMG! Did you actually read all of this?!
This is my story thus far. I think it's beautiful, if you ask me. I've been working on it for a year now, almost exactly. Well, it's not exactly a story in here, it's more like the "notes" of my story. If you want the full blown story...prepare to be drowned in papers and papers of doo doo!
This is actually a comic book. If you've seen my signature, that would be Crucis and Polaris. Yes...I will publish it sometime in the future.
Why did I post it up here? Because I need to get all of this wacko information out of my head. Or else, I'll get all mentally dizzy and all.
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