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The Rift
A serious personal series utilizing myself and my friends as characters. I do not take requests.
NOt about the Movie, a peom I wrote
Today is the Day that I will die for you,

I love you, and I wish that you knew.

It is time to repent for my sin,

I feel like I'm alone in this world's state of corruption,

No more is natural, no more is Zen,

All there is to sing is a Creed of the Fallen.

Of course the only thing Pure left is Love,

It could've took us up to the Heavens above,

As Ignorance is bliss,

I need my dreams to kiss,

As the Masses are drastically being marked down the list.

In my eyes, this nation

Is in a state of Devestation,

With no eyes,

Walking Blind,

In a provaricated state of mind.

As I declare this world unholy,

There is nothing to escape the Mighty Melancholy,

I love you and while you don't know it,

Of course I was too much afraid to show it,

And Now, while I point this gun to my Heart,

My only regret is that I didn't tell you from the start,

So Finally, with this gun at my chest,

I hope to only think of you in Eternal Rest.






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rainbowpopsicleslol
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 07, 2009 @ 01:25pm
omg your poem made me cry so hard crying


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 22, 2010 @ 02:22am
<33 damn creed made me cry so hard.
I frigging love youAs a big bro for writing this.



wingsarenotmean
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commentCommented on: Sat May 29, 2010 @ 07:45pm
sob... sob...

i love this poem... i'm in love with this poem!


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 28, 2010 @ 08:23am
That was so beautiful! crying



O_OBlack AsparagusO_O
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Lt Crazymonky56789 -GMCC-
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 03, 2010 @ 04:25pm
never though of you as a poet


G.Henegar
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“The object of war is not to die for your country but to make the other b*****d die for his."

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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 29, 2010 @ 03:57am
thats.....amazing........wow so beautiful.............wow.........



XxXluna eclipseXxX
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