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Aki is ninja
Me is ultimate ninja
Something Inside
THIS IS A POEM I WANT ALL TO READ AND COMMENT PLEASE

There's something inside me waiting to come out
It's not good more like a demon wanting to kill
What's wrong with me I have no clue this demon
Will surely grow until I loose control

Someone anyone will you help me?
Or will this thing treat me like
It's puppet
I don't want this never have I
but I can't control what's inside

The demon slowly starts to break my bond
Chains are surrounding me everywhere
Holding me down so i'll feel the pain
It inflicts upon my soul

Day by Day i'm falling deeper into
The darkness as it consumes the light
That once shone brightly in my mind
I'm so alone and cold I feel like

An icicle about to shatter
Why did it choose me?
I'll never find an answer
So please help me free me

From this demons hold before
It's to late and I finally break
I can't find anyway out I can
Hear it laughing at my pain

Taughting me as the bloody tears
Stain my face I keep yelling at it
To stop for someone to save me
But it's no use my voice is nothing

Only a small little whimper can be heard
Now the chains start to tighten and my pain
Grows more and more every second this is it
I'm afraid

As my soul is finally devoured by the shadows
And it fully takes over this something inside me
has finally won the battle I say my goodbye
One last time as I slowly fade away never to be seen
Again.






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-I-TheMonkeyKing-I-
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 09, 2009 @ 04:26am
AWESOME!!!!!!!I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT BUT I HATE WRITTING whee whee whee whee whee whee whee whee


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 09, 2009 @ 10:30am
Hehehe thanks i'm glad you love my writing..... redface kekeke



Raina Salvatore
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F is For Freedom
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 25, 2010 @ 02:41pm
WOW! I rly love it smile
oh yeah, what should rosa and s watch at his house?
disney? XD


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