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My borin journal!XD
Well i dont know what ill write but hope its good.XD
Going down(Poem)
Losing
A bullet has hit telling me a story,
a story my of my life that has passed me by,
the bullet has won against me as i slip away,
it doesnt matter now i fought knowing i would die later,
cancer spread through my lungs living and growing for months.
My blood pools below me while i say goodbye,
knowing this is better then death of cancer.

I wake up in a place with no pain,
my scares have healed and memories only a dream,
i live the better life now,
i might have lost but it seems i have won.






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Dominant xX Damsel
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 20, 2010 @ 08:04pm
I really like it (: Its great!


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 26, 2010 @ 07:54pm
This was really amazing. you should write more poems. then publish them. :3



Souless_WolfSpirit
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