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Kitty's Boredom
I don't really use this anymore.
Poem for English.
This is the place of my heart.
Here and now, this is my part.
In this glorious planet, we call Earth.
Satisfied inside, with great mirth.

In this place, my heart is glad.
Spring days would never ever make me sad.

These are the colours I yearn to see.
Hot colours, cool, some remind me of the sea.
Every hue is a new colour to me.

Please let me be. Please, let me be.
Let me enjoy this very moment of peace and tranquillity.
And let me enjoy this moment of wonder and beauty
Creator, thank you for this amazing ability.
Every sight, every smell. Living like this, is a dream for/to me.

Oh, this place, it makes me smile.
Flowering plants can be seen for miles.

Mysterious and exotic, each plant seems to be.
Yet stranger and stranger, but that’s alright with me.

Have a heart, care for this land.
Everyone’s here, hand in hand.
Aid this world, let’s be a part.
Refresh this planet, right from the start.
Then this will truly be, the place of my heart.






User Comments: [9]
XoXHayama_Ryouku13
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 08:42am


I think dream "for" me sound better biggrin
ITS AWESOME <3 I love it!! seriously,lovely heart


Ol-Kitty-lO
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 08:49am


»...I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly...«
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Yay! Thank's Ryo <3333
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»...I'll do what it takes, 'til I touch the sky...«


Cinnamon Swirlz
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 09:17am


Ohh it's so good! I love it! ^^
I agree, for sounds a bit better, though I think it's good either way.
Good job! =D


Ol-Kitty-lO
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 09:18am


»...I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly...«
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Thank you Swirlz! <3
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»...I'll do what it takes, 'til I touch the sky...«


Ice shinigami
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 09:24am


I really like it alot =D thats all I can say cause i cant think of anything else to say o.o


Ol-Kitty-lO
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 09:26am


»...I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly...«
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Lol
Thank you Iceee~
It's okay. <3
That's enough words for me.
xD

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»...I'll do what it takes, 'til I touch the sky...«


AzNRabbiT552
Community Member





Wed Feb 17, 2010 @ 04:03pm


I can't really get to the emotion of the poem even though by reading the words it's suppose to tell me, and it's just a bit off to me.


Rithh
Community Member





Thu Feb 18, 2010 @ 01:07am


It's a wonderful, go-green, and moving poem.
You should definately get an A+ on this! c:


Ol-Kitty-lO
Community Member





Thu Feb 18, 2010 @ 06:40am


»...I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly...«
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K ! т т y .....
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Jen;;
Ahh, okay.
Have any suggestions for improving?

Rithh;;
Aww, thank you. <3
I sure hope it does.
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»...I'll do what it takes, 'til I touch the sky...«


User Comments: [9]
 
 
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