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~Chapter Three~ ♥Smoke-a-pillar Questions♥ Alice pushed her way through brances and leaves. "White Rabbit! Oh Mr. Rabbit!" she called. Her foot caught a vine. "What the.. Let go of me you stupid thing." She kicked her foot at the vine until it let loose to set her free. "Stupid?" The vine asked. "What is stupid? Are you stupid?" Alice frowned at the vine. "No, of course not." "Well then." The vine twisted and unraveled as it spoke. A catapillar stood in its place. "Do you know everything?" He asked as he drew shapes of smoke from his drag. Alice rubbed her eyes. "Oh great..Now the bugs can talk.." She sighed, swatting the smoke from her face and coughing. "Keep that on your side please." "Do you know everything?" The catapillar asked again, blowing more smoke into Alice's face. Alice coughed as she fanned awa the smoke, taking a step back from him. "No. No one does." She answered, taking a cloth from her dress pocket to clean the smoke from her eyes. "Then you are stupid." The catapillar tapped the ash from his drag. Alice frowned, crossing her arms in front of her chest. She scowled at the catapillar. "Who are you to call me stupid?" "Who am I?" The catapillar asked, unmoved from his smoking routine. He blew more smoke into her face as he asked, "Who are you?" "W-what..?" Alice choked, her eyes watered as she tried to see through the smoke. The catapillar sighed. "Stupid..Girl.." Smoke surrounded his body, swirling in its own time. The catapillar morphed back into the vine as the smoke disperesed into the atmosphere. Alice, not noticed his disappearance, ran deeper into the jungled-woods to escape from the smoke. "Rude insect.."

Posted by: Symarea Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:07am

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Seraphiel of Song
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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:13am


	In the old Alice in Wonderland movie I never liked the caterpillar. And I cant say my feelings have changed. But I luv it otherwise ^w^

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:16am


	Stupid insect.... e.e Takes out an axe and bug sprey twisted

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:26am


	That stupid insect is me Dante. >_> forms into a human and beats him up You stupid bunny.

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:28am


	And Chihiro, I am awesome. >_>

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:28am


	That stupid bunny happens to be my boyfriend >/ clings to bunny and whacks the caterpillar on the head

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:32am


	Stupid girl..blows smoke in your face

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:35am


	chokes and coughs >/ slaps ichi

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:38am


	Damn Sage Ultimate super glomps sage then smacks Muahahahaha! >D

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:39am


	ducks down and blows even more smoke in your face -sigh-

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:40am


	what is it with you and glomping dante ? o_o

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:41am


	Snaps fingers and 10 others clones surrounds Sage the attack him altogether I have no idea.... o.o??

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:45am


	blows smoke all around you and dissapears in it Whatcha gonna do ? Cant hit what ya cant find. Stupid bunny.

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 01:57am


	Oh how I love that caterpillar.

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:00am


	Summons flames from the ground We'll see about that.. >3

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:07am


	Author: ~slams journal next to them all, is 500 feet heigh compared them~ Enough.

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:09am


	O.O''

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Seraphiel of Song
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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:24am


	OMG its the author... everyone behave yourselves! gasp stare

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:28am


	Author: ~glares at Chi~ I control your life in this story.. And I can make it a living hell. ~picks her up by her outfit and holds her over a large candle flame~ Catch my drift?

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:49am


	e.e damn.... throws a brick at Sage and make sure it hits him <.<

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:49am


	AIIEEE but I didnt do anything! The bunny and caterpillar were the ones fighting! D; wiggles

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 02:50am


	Whoops it posted twice... so I changed the second one razz

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 03:30am


	Author: ~puts Chi back down. puts the catapillar and the bunny in two separate cages~ You were fighting to Chi.. I was warning of your sarcasm. ~opens book and begins to write the next chapter~

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 04:39am


	e.e I hate being locked up....

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 04:40am


	looks at what the author is writing <3

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 05:35am


	Looks over at Chihiro wondering what the author was writing

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 07:09am


	.....my, this makes me laugh and cry ._.

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Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 10:53pm


	~waves Chi away from my writing then looks at Shense oddly~ Cry?

Commented on: Mon Mar 15, 2010 @ 10:55pm


	Let mii out of here please... I hate being locked up... T-T

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Commented on: Tue Mar 16, 2010 @ 12:07am


	slips inside the bunny's cage and clings to him the author is scary... o_o

Commented on: Tue Mar 16, 2010 @ 01:01am


	Hugs chi how so?, is it cause we're like ants to her?

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Commented on: Tue Mar 16, 2010 @ 02:11am


	YES. plus she threatened to burn me. e-e

Commented on: Tue Mar 16, 2010 @ 02:29am


	Hold Chi You'll be safe in here..

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Commented on: Wed Mar 17, 2010 @ 05:02am


	You are all infact puppets to the auther's writing. I on the otherhand.. sits on Sy's shoulder 8] P.S. The caterpillar rocks!

Commented on: Wed Mar 17, 2010 @ 12:40pm


	=) Hiya there Dagger.

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Commented on: Wed Mar 17, 2010 @ 07:13pm


	e.e Bends the bars open Much better... ^-^

Commented on: Thu Mar 18, 2010 @ 03:25am


	I love your interpretation of Alice in Wonderland. razz Almost makes me want to come up with one. Or at least start writing fiction again. heart Silence your harsh words, my dear.... My ears are ringing of this, I can't stop thinking of it. ...I try to reach you but I fall....

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Commented on: Thu Mar 18, 2010 @ 07:29am


	Hiya Sy

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