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Death of the Heart: Ch1






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Moonlit Star
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 15, 2006 @ 02:39am
I've never read/seen the series before, but you have me interested in your story. ^_^

I would suggest introducing the characters a bit more gently; have some casual interaction between them and maybe throw in a description or two to help readers get a feel for their personalities.

I can't wait to read the next chapter~ whee


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