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Poem
(To be read while listening to Rain and Storm) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=peX7TWlClEg

Heavy heart

I lay awake in bed
Every night thinking and hoping,
Thinking of my lonely self;
Hoping to be with some one,
Some one who will be there;
There for me, who will love;
Love me for who I am,
Who will treat me like
They feel about me.
some one to set me free.

Free to be
be alive and Strong,
Knowing that nothing will go wrong.
Nothing with the love,
love of my Heart.
My heart shall Move
Move on its own.
I will not Need,
Some One.
Time has changed
And so have I.

Now I lay again
on the floor.
Cold and Bleeding,
Wishing I could be,
be with you.
No one else will
steal this heart.
This heart that you have taken,
and love know wasn't Mistaken.

I take these Final breaths,
Breaths of sorrow and joy.
I only say Sorry;.
Sorry and thank you.
Thank you for your love, and forgive
Forgive me for breaking
breaking my promise;
Promise to be by your side.
Now In the darkness I shall Hide.
Hide as I close my eyes,
I love you.






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The Esper Terra
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 05, 2010 @ 02:02am
Very great bro, really love it, fits with the music well...
Really really great bro **hugs**


commentCommented on: Mon Dec 06, 2010 @ 02:23am
Its written nicely, sad though. :l Good job.



Trinkxy
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Maliciious
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 06, 2010 @ 03:47am
I really like this poem


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 07, 2010 @ 12:40am
Really nice! Why is it so sad? D:



Starxiez
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Sinful of Lust
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 09, 2011 @ 02:12am
This is great!!


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 20, 2012 @ 01:21am
Nice poem yum_cupcake



Ecchi69
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Clarissa Drago
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 09, 2013 @ 07:05am
wow DS i never knew you wrote poems this was touching and the music to go with it was beautiful. Such a nice read and also sad made me cry a little as i read it.


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 09, 2013 @ 07:38am
beautiful~



Forgotten_Tuskino
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Shaky jakeward
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 11, 2015 @ 09:43pm
wow thats a really good poem ! your verry talanted cool


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