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The Sudden Comatose

She was a normal high school student with averages grades. She is taking karate and fencing with her best friend Diana. Her everyday life was quite normal getting along with her parents and sometimes with her older brother and older sister. Quite almost everything was normal until suddenly she went in to coma. It happened not very quickly but in some kind of odd yet related events.

"Arisa!" called her best friend Diana waving at her while running to her. Diana was in different classes from her friend Arisa but she didn't mind much getting to see her during physical education.

It was after school and on Wednesday, the two friends were going to their fencing class. Diana had short brown hair and light skin wearing a red t-shirt and blue jeans carrying her backpack on one shoulder and carrying her fencing bag in her right hand.

"Hey Diana." Arisa was sitting down on the stairs waiting for her friend to hurry up.
Arisa had long black hair in a ponytail and light brown skin wearing a long grey t-shirt and blue jeans.

"What took you so long Diana?" Arisa asked as she went up from sitting on the stairs, holding her fencing bag and carrying her messenger bag.

Her friend soon became flustered with her face turning scarlet and she murmured quietly, "I got scolded by my history teacher..."

"Why in the world did you get scolded by your history teacher?"

"I shouted when school ended saying, Yes! Fencing here I come!" Diana said in a small and timid voice.

Arisa soon sighed and said, "Why would you yell in class when it's about to end and the teacher going to dismiss you?"

"I got excited."

"So you could be free and go fencing away all your thoughts of homework and school. But you shouldn't really do that." Arisa said jokingly while smirking.

"Okay Mom!"

"Pssh. Enough talk and let's go or Coach Kaufman will scold us too!"

The both of them soon stopped talking and walking to the bus stop waiting for the bus. Arisa looked around the stop being bored waiting and saw a crowd surrounding a store.

"Look over there Diana! There's such a huge commotion!" Arisa said with outmost curiosity.

"Really? I wonder what is the store name..." Diana was about to adjust her reading glasses until Arisa said, "It's Play N' Trade.... Never mind maybe it's just a game."

"Uh-uh. Let's go and see it!"

"Oh no we're not. We have to go to fencing." Arisa said trying to distract her but was useless. Diana's eyes were sparkling.

Arisa knew that whenever there was a new gadget or game Diana must have it.

Diana took Arisa's hand and almost dragged her to the store's window within the crowd.

The two of them got near the store window and looked through. Inside the window there was the regular cyber glasses that every one uses but there was a virtual visual screen appear above it.

‘The Cyber Glasses is now upgraded! Now version 0.10 of year 2030!'

"An upgrade! I need to buy it! It must have some new features!" Diana squealed and was twirling around.

"It might expensive and I don't have much money..." Arisa said and then her friend said, "Don't worry! I will buy one for you!"

"Are you sure Diana?"

"Yes. I got enough money to buy us both Arisa! What's that?" She pointed at a visual screen next to it and Arisa soon noticed it seeing it was a preview of a new game.

‘The Universe?' Arisa thought and then when she turned around she noticed Diana disappeared and in place of her there was a girl in black clothes up and down and a black hood over her head covering her eyes.

‘Who is she?' Arisa thought and then the girl spoke quietly and mysteriously, "It will be soon beginning..."

Arisa looked at her being confused and the girl soon mysteriously disappeared into the crowd.

"Ah? Who was she?"

"Who is who?" Diana asked and Arisa was alarmed when she came back next to her.

"It doesn't matter anyway. Where did you go?"

"Inside the store. I bought the game ‘The Universe' and the two cyber glasses." Diana replied.

"Oh... By the way let's go the bus's here!" Arisa shouted and she grabbed Diana going on the bus.

The two of them sat in the bus and Diana gave her the upgraded cyber glasses.

"Thanks."

"Welcomes."

Diana soon talked about the game, which Arisa wasn't interested in look outside the window while watching the scene goes by thinking about the girl that spoke to her.

"Arisa we're here."

"Eh? Sorry I was distracted..."

"It's okay lets go."

The two friends went off the bus and they went inside to their fencing class greeting their coach.

"Ah you two are finally here." Coach Kaufman said with her cyber glasses on her head soon putting it on. Soon there was a virtual screen appear and then she said, "Get dressed and go to practice. There is a competition next week."

"Yes ma'am!" the two of them ran to the locker room. Arisa got dressed quickly while the cyber glasses distracted Diana. "Gosh. Hurry up Diana."

"Ok."

"I'm heading out first then." Arisa said grabbing her foil going out of the locker room. While going out she saw the black dressed girl again. "You again! Just who are...you??"

"The beginning will soon begin with destruction coming to its way." She replied not giving her the answer and Arisa felt strange and tired all a sudden collapsing.

Diana came out and she saw Arisa on the floor unconscious. "Arisa.... Arisa what's wrong? Wake up!!"