ok just an idea of a story that i'm currently writing, as all the others have failed me...... anyways, tell me what you think c ya : )
The night was young as the dwelling stars shown brightly acroos the black sky. on this particular night, there was an ongoing celebration, of the arrival of a new member of the court. The news of a new had risen and all in the kingdom were invited to see the newborn. it as a named as the princess of the royal line Milan Arkanes. She laid in her rocking bed, accepting glorious gifts from the arriving guests. Her father and mother looked at their child, happiness in their eyes of the beauty their child had come.
Everyone danced and greeted one another. " Life of the party " they would say, stoding across the wonderous floor. The ed teh guests danced and talk, wondering if this was her life to be. She dimissed the thought, and dozed to cloud nine, dreaming of running in the meadow with her animal friends.
The lights grew dim as a shadow passed them. Onlookers Stopped in bewilderment at the sight of an uninvited guest that would show his face. " Very nice party," the dark figure announced. " What are you doing here, you...you monster?!" responded the king, " I thought I banished you." " Honestly, that is no way to treat a guest, " replied the figure, cooly. " You are no guest. you are an enemy!" countered the king. The dark, gloomy figure glided up the steps to meet the king face to face. A sparkle caught his eye from the princess's crown. " Awww, and who is this? Your daughter i presume?" hissed the figure,"very beautiful, I might add." The mother gasped as the figure made a move to touch the princess, but stopped by a blade to his throat. He backed away suddenly, knowing what would happen if he went too far. " Do not dare touch her you fool," barked the king. The crowd drawn by the feriousity watch intensely.
The dark figure glanced at the child, then back at the king. " If I were you, i'd be more careful now that your time here is almost up. Soon your daughter will be mine," he hissed, " Besides, I think she would be better with the...." He trailed, thinking of a different, more evil plan. He turned, then turned again, his hood very luminous. "Fine, but in time she will be mine which is slipping away. Now i leave you," said the figure. he laughed while his cloak vanished completely.
Everyone whispered around, trying to figure out what had just happened. The king turned to his wife, with worry in his eyes. She registered as the figure scared her too. Finally the king spoke," Citizens, let us return to this celebration. Nothing to be concerned about. Please do not worry." he turned and walked briskly back to the castle. He needed to sort out things straight, and needed to do it, in order to protect his daughter. I lost my son to him, the king thought, I will not lose my daughter. He stormed into his courting chamber, and into his throne, known as the thinking chair.
View User's Journal
Do i need to say?
 |
