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Hello fellow people of the world i have decited to make a journal (or so you can tell) anyway i will write things that i care about and stuff i don't. well to start things off i want to share one of my favorite poems that i wrote myself during history class (cause it was boring!!!!! scream ) yes i don't really like history but i pass it anyway. ok enough about that its time for my poem!! i hope that you people like it as much as i do! heart no this is not about me... its just about a girl...not me.


"waiting"
i feel shuned by the world
inside and out

i can't feel the heat
the light has gone out

Why do i feel my sight is no more?
But i can see clearly; my eye is the door

i open it up and look through the crack
i go outside but talk a step back

am i afraid what people will think?
will they accept me, or throw me out into the drink?

ok..i'm outside, so i walk down the street
i wish to go back but there's somone to meet

That someone is special, gentle and kind
he taught me to love and not be so blind

As i wait for him to appear
i look all around, but no one is near

i wait and i wait as time passes by
i see a faint shadow, so i look to the sky

i see him, he's here... here to protect
in rain, or in shine, in life or in death

his hair is so soft and his eyes are so deep
that the ocean dare not even compete

all those are impressive; but those things are little
but look to his back and there in the middle...

are two feathered wings
so big and so bright, that the sun would get jelous if ever in sight

all together, my hero, so sweet and gentle
that the words that describe him are

Guardian Angel






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Naleo
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commentCommented on: Thu May 11, 2006 @ 02:38am
that was sniff... great crying . As a poet (yes i do write poetry) its pretty dam good. You got somelines that need to be fixed but wow that was really good. Nice discription of your character and what a great ending!!! mrgreen


commentCommented on: Sun May 14, 2006 @ 06:51am
Nice poem..I can't believe you wrote that! xd xp



CompletelyFatal
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lR Y lN
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commentCommented on: Mon May 22, 2006 @ 01:16am
OMG that is so beautiful!!!! blaugh


commentCommented on: Fri May 26, 2006 @ 05:17am
that was a really nice poem heart



PrincessDaniela5
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