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Its my poetry tell me what you think
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By: Daimos Amatros

Endangered people please make way
I'm trying to live another day
Ranting, raving with my voice
I'm going to hell, I have no choice
My life is doomed, I have no time
Others are doomed too, but they follow the mime
Rotting away, our minds slosh to mud
If Christ died for me it was a waste of blood
Another day, I have maintained to live
Avoided being sucked down hell's sieve
Ever ending church days, I knew they'd never last
Goodbye god, heavens a thing of the past.
Monkeys to men, that's how we became
Its a lot more to go by than Christs seven-day claim
One day I'll grow old, eventually die
That's all there is--no euphoria in the sky





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  • [12/15/04 05:12pm]

  • User Comments: [6] [add]
    Sheoldred
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    commentCommented on: Thu Dec 16, 2004 @ 12:27am
    I must say this is very well done.I love the style,manner and theme.^_^ heart


    commentCommented on: Wed Dec 22, 2004 @ 07:05am
    Personally I think this is much deeper than I thought it would be.Not that I had any lesser expectations.I love this.



    Eddies girl Yukiharu
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    shorty-lynn
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    commentCommented on: Wed Dec 22, 2004 @ 05:52pm
    i love you poem, it flows really good. And it's way better than my dark poems. wink


    commentCommented on: Tue Mar 01, 2005 @ 02:09am
    wai I love it! it's really preetyful sounding!! heart

    blaugh *huggles you* MWHAHAHAHA



    Midwinter Colors
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    [Mazohyst of Decadence]
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    commentCommented on: Sat May 07, 2005 @ 07:05am
    That's Beautiful.


    commentCommented on: Wed Apr 11, 2007 @ 05:28pm
    that poem is amazing! Youre good!



    TheUnforgiven2
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