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Another one for all you people
Well since people seemed to like my last poem I will put another one in here mrgreen

I can't keep living with these aches and pains,
I act like nothing's happened but the scares remain.
Everyone is gone they left me alone, with nothing,
Not even a place to call home.
I feel lost, unloved, like no body cares,
Like no body wants me,
Like nobody's there.
It feels like there's no body in the world that really knows me
I'm all alone in the darkness, and I can never be free.

Well, it's not my best one but I kinda like it, what do you guys think?






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Butt-Naked Snake
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 07, 2006 @ 06:00pm
I like it. did you read my poem in my journal yet?


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 08, 2006 @ 04:46pm
yeah, I left a comment too mrgreen



x_Acid-Rainbows_x
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Stupenduz Man
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 14, 2007 @ 09:58pm
Pretty good... I like poetry. 3nodding especially good poetry 3nodding 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 12:54am
it SUCKS...lol just kidding is pretty good but so sad sad



Valeoncat
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