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Elis

An arrow whizzed past, where a young girl around seven years of age, knelt on the forest floor next to her dead father. She gripped her father's hand crying as she was saying, "Wake up daddy! I need you! You can't leave me now! Please, daddy!" She took the arrow out of her father's stomach and pulled it out, then threw it on the ground next to her. She touched her father's stomach, as if trying to heal him, as another set of arrows came flying past, she cryed even harder. For on her hand... Was her father's blood.

A horse rider stopped at Elis's side and screamed, "Elis! Come, now! We need to leave before you get killed too!" "No!" Yelled Elis in reply, "Not without Daddy!" "Elis, he's dead!" The horse rider, appearing to be her mother, picked Elis up and set her on the horse, which looked a blinding white color with a golden mane. It was a very odd horse, indeed it was. But, before the little girl's (named Elis) mother could get a good grip on Elis, she jumped off and grabbed her father's bow and arrows and his belt, where his sword was sheathed, as was his dagger. After Elis had picked up her father's items, her mother picked her up. When they were galloping away, Elis yelled back to her father's corpse, "I will find whoever did this to you! I promise! When I do, I will kill them! I'm coming back for you daddy!" They finaly made it to the safety of a far-away town... Where they now live.
1st chapter to Elis!
Ok, Ok, I know a lot of you have been waiting a while for this... And I'm sorry it took so long. I've just had a lot of trouble editing it and adding more to the first chapter. Plus, making up names is harder then you would think it is... Trust me, I've made a lot of names. The intro to my journal was just the prologue. So, the first chapter goes ten years away from the prologue... So keep in mind that a lot of this might be a little confusing. And, I'm not typing the whole chapter yet... It's too long to fit onto one entry. Ok, well, here it is...

Chapter One: The arrival
10 years after her father died; Elis still held his items as close as the strange rock he had given her, just before he died. She still remember his last words to her: 'Elis, darling, don't think I've forgotten you... Take care of your mother and this stone, for it is no ordinary stone... It is...' But, he died before he could say what it was.

Elis had been practicing swords-man-ship and shooting arrows, to prepare for the one day that she might meet her father's killer. She was the best in the village. Many of the young girls admired her as she used her sword to spar with one of the men from the village. But, of course, she wasn't sparring to win... More of to show off.

One day, around the sparring field in the village, Elis met a young man about her age. He came over to talk to Elis. As he stopped next to her he held out his hand, "Hello. My name is Tonner. My friends call me Ton. I was wondering if you had seen a little girl, a father, and a mother?"
Elis shook Tonner's hand, "My name is Elis. And well, you might want to be a little more specific. Because there are a lot of families with just a little girl. But, I'll point you to the nearest one." She said, pointing to a little girl standing be her father and mother, eating a cookie.
"No, no that's not her... Let me be a little more specific. Have you seen someone who is not, so to speak, normal?"
"Actually, there is this little girl who is just a tad bit strange... But, I'm not sure exactly where she lives."
"Well, thank you anyway."

Tonner looked at Elis' face one more time as she flipped her long, blonde hair. He finally realized that he had been talking to an elf. He looked at the carvings on the sword... It had the royal elven symbol on it, and other odd carvings. He looked at the dagger and the bow, same as the sword. Then, he finally looked at the arrow, it was a certain type of paint that only the elves use. At last he concluded that she was the royal elf by looking at her ears and into her eyes, beautiful blue. "Ah, at last, Elis... I have found you." Said Tonner, looking a bit relieved.
"Excuse me? You've found me?" Elis said in a little bit of a bratty tone. Plus, she was a bit astonished that someone had been looking for her. Tonner grabbed her arm and she saw something, a letter, but in her mind...

Dear my love,
I see you've grown a tad. I just wanted to let you know that your grandparents and I are here for you. We're always here. Even if we are in heavan. And, we will be in touch very soon. Blessed be, my darling. Tell your mother I said hello.
With all my love,
Your father.


TO BE CONTINUED...






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Midnight Crawler
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 20, 2006 @ 02:26am
I just love making all of you wait. xD It's so much fun. Plus, it builds up the tension.


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