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Poem... Hi I got bored so I decided to make a poem about life. Enjoy! Staring out Into the deep blue sky. I realize another life Passes me by. All I can do Is dream to be free. I cant just stay here And hope for my destiny. With a restless soul And a mind full of thoughts My life gets shorter and tied up in knots. So with nowhere to stay And nowhere to go I hope that one day My life's calling will show. Hatred and sorrow And joy and greed. The more I give The more I need. The shadows tell me nothing Of what I will do. My sources turn against me It's sad but it's true. The rope keeps getting tighter The more I move around. Like a bird trapped in quicksand Sinking into the ground. Why does the summer rain? Or why does the winter snow? I haven't found my true nature yet. But someday...I will know... So whatcha think? 3nodding 3nodding

Posted by: x- Sephiroth -x Tue Aug 08, 2006 @ 05:50am

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Commented on: Tue Aug 08, 2006 @ 03:05pm


	ooo that's a goood poem omg ur better than me lol biggrin and i am sooo tired it is like 6 in the moring cause i have to go work cause i need money lol! biggrin I reallly liked ur poem though I give it an A+ ya know it almost seems sad

Commented on: Tue Aug 08, 2006 @ 05:59pm


	gotta say it's a very good, and amazing poem.. it flows greatly and even tho it doesn't snow here in the winter i know what ya mean... It's a very good poem.. keep them up. I write some, but not as good as that...

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Commented on: Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 02:33am


	That's an amazing, awesome poem! It flowed together sooooooooooo good! You're a very good poet!

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