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MWA Ch. 21: Two love's crush
Ray*: Last time, on Metalwolf Alchemist!!

‘ So, what do you think, Alex*? ‘ Tom asked. ‘ What do you mean? ‘ Alex* thought, still reading. ‘ I don’t know. ‘bout me. I know I wasn’t to unlock the seal though.’ Tom said. ‘ It’s alright, I feel different, like stronger different anyways. ‘ Alex* smiled.

“ You can “ A voice said. “ Huh?” Flame shot up. “ Uhhh… Who said that?” She asked. “ Down here, sis “ Flame looked down, to see her pet, Sparx talking to her!! “ What the hell!!!!??” Flame yelled. “ Shhhh! Calm down, Flame. It really is me, Tim! That lab incident turned me into this thing. “ He said as he jumped onto the floor, transforming into a male teen. Around 17 at least. He looked like flame, but had red wings and shorter hair. The clothes were sorta similar. “ Timothy…………?”

Alex*: Onto Ch.21!!

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Flame stared at her brother, eyes widen as Ray* just stared. “ Timothy……?” Flame trailed off. ‘ Tim?’ Rage said. ‘ Yeah. My brother…….’ Flame trailed within her mind. Ray* looked at them both. “ Whoa…..”
Tim sweat-dropped. “ So…. Are you going to give me a hug? Or just stand there gawking at me?” Tim asked, a little laughing. Flame rushed to him, hugging the hell out of him, small tears appear. ’ Awwww. Ain’t that a touching moment, Ray*’ Gale said. ‘ Shut up’ Ray* sighed. “ Flame….” Tim smiled. “ So. Your Ray* right? Thought you’d be a lil bit taller you know?” Tim said. Ray* got pissed. “ WHO COME BACK TO YOUR SISTER!!!!!! AND YOU MAKE FUN OF HER BEST FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??? WHAT THE ********?!” She screeched.

~~~~~~ Meanwhile ~~~~~~

Alex*, Ty, Serenity, Edward, and Alphonse paused for a second. “ Ray*’s still awake…” They trailed.

* The Next Day *

Ray* woke up with a yawn, seeing Tim next to her. Her eyes widen and she screamed. “ GET THE ******** AWAY FROM MY FACE!!!!!!!!!” Ray* said pissed. Flame awoke as well. “ Huh? Who is it?” She saw her brother on the floor. “ What are you doing on the floor?” She asked. “ I live on the floor, Flame… Ray* pushed me off.” He replied. “ Then don’t sleep near me.” She said as she stood, going into her suitcase. “ Turn around .” Ray* said. “ Huh?” He cocked a brow. “ I am going to get dressed, I like to change sometimes you know.” She said as Tim turned around, as Ray* got out a black sweater with her wolf symbol on it. She put it on, and put the rest of her clothes in the suit case. “ There we go. I love my sweater.” Ray* smiled. Flame nodded as her brother turned around. “ So. Where do we go?” He asked. “ Ummm… We’ll have to ask everyone first.” Ray* said as she got out of the room, seeing everyone there. “ So……. Where do we go?” Ty asked. Everyone started to think. “ How ‘bout Rivaban? The Vampire town?” Everyone looked at Ray*. “ What? I’m half… well.. From my father’s side. I wanna learn more you know.” Ray* said. “ Cool!! You’re a vampire!!?” Flame and Edward asked. “ Sort of…. My blood has to awake still.” Ray* started to back up. ‘ So…. Old Rivaban eh? I heard they have a Carnival going on in a few days as well.’ Gale said with a smile. ‘ Really? Cool’ Ray* said happily within her mind as she walked out the door, the others following. “ So…. What’s Rivaban like, sis?” Alex* asked. Ray* took out a map and gave it to Alex*. “ Cool.” Alex* smiled. “ Still. You are surprises, Ray*.” Ty said. “ So? But you have to keep it a secret though. Not even central knows this you know.” Ray* said. “ Why not tell them?” Alphonse asked. “ Well. I’ve heard rumors around the area, Vampires started to lose their sanity as well, biting people.” Ray* said. “ Oh.” Alphonse replied. ‘ I wanna walk…….’ Gale complained. ‘ So do I, Gale’ Ray* said .

* On the road to Rivaban *
“ Are you sure we’re not lost?” A male teen asked. Around 15. He looked at a female teen, around 16. “ I know where I’m going, Ren. Sheesh.” She replied. “ Could’ve fooled me.” The teen, or Ren sighed, his hand were behind his head. “ I could be at the beach. Looking for some girls… but we have to go this carnival….” He groaned as the girl got pissed. “ Would you shut up!!! God dammit!!” She yelled.

~~~ Meanwhile, on the same road ~~~~

“ I hear people yelling.” Ray* sweat-dropped. “ Really?” Ty listened closely. “ Ah…... Yup.” She said. They all started to see the two, they looked like they were fighting, Ren giving the girl a noogie. Ray* and Tim started at them. “ Uhhhhhh…..” They both trailed. The two stopped and looked up, blushing and stopped what they were doing. Ren walked towards Ray*, smiling. Ray* cocked a brow. “ Hi, there.” He smiled. Ty and the girl sweat-dropped. “ Hi.” Ray* smiled back. ‘ Will you tell him you like him already!!!!!??? I can hear your god damn thoughts already!!!!!’ Gale yelled. ‘ Shut up!!!!!!!!!!’ Ray* yelled with a lil blush across her face. Ty slithered next to her. “ You like him.” She smirked. “ Shut up!!” She said. Ren stood there smiling. “ Really? ’Cause… I like you.” He said. Ray* blushes even more. Ren took Ray*’s hand and started walking toward Rivaban. “ So, you are going here, right?” He asked. “ Uhhh… Yes” Ray* sweat-dropped. They both started to walk further until they looked like ants. “ Well…. He made her ditch us.” Edward said. “ He’s like that sometimes. I’m Sora by the way.” She smiled. “ Cool. I’m Edward Elric.” Edward said. “ Alphonse Elric.” “ Alexandra Hatari” “ Tyresa Yamato” “ Serenity” “ Flame.” “ I’m Tim” Tim smiled. “ Hello, Tim.” Sora smiled.
( Ray*: I’m not really a romance writer so…. Nngh…. >.< I prefer action ^^;;; )
~~~~~~~~~ Meanwhile with Ren & Ray* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They both reached Rivaban, and sat at a café. It looked old fashion. So did the whole town actually. “ So, your Metalwolf? Cool. I’m a ninja from a water tribe.” Ren smiled. “ Cool!!!!” Ray* said. “ So…… where do you live?” Ren asked. Ray* paused. “ Ren…. I have no home………. Not anymore……. Remember the group you saw?” She asked as he nodded. “ We all have heavy weights to carry. So, we never look back, not even to where we live….” Ray* trailed, hanging her head low. Ren got up and hugged her. “ We all got something to carry…………” He said. Ray* froze, small tears fell down her face. ‘ Why?…. Why am I crying…..?’ Ray* thought. Gale was asleep within her as she hugged Ren tighter. The rest of the gang caught up, Tim and Sora had their hands linked. “ Sis?” Alex* looked at them. “Yes……… Alex*?” Ray* asked, still in Ren’s arms. “ Are you alright?” Alex* asked worried. “ Yeah…. I’m fine now……” Ray* said as Ren stroke her hair. Ray* looked up at him as they went closer- ( Alex*: Hmmmm…. What’cha writing? Ray*: -- A love scene -- Get lost Alex*: --fine!!!! Ray*: The ppl are trying to read, sis!!! Sorry ‘bout that ppl ^^ now… where was I? Ah, yes!! ^^ )They went closer, and locked lips. * in Ray*’s mind * Gale started to awake, seeing this…….. “ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH MY EYES!!!!!!!!!” Gale shouted, only Ray* laughing in her mind. * end of Ch. 21 *

Hmmm… I think it went well. What you think ppl? Oh, yeah ^^ ha ha! Anyways. Preview!!!!!!!!

Sora: Next Time, On Metalwolf Alchemist!
They are in the most famous city! Rivaban. Mostly homes to Vampires, Werewolves. You know the rest. But… Something’s weird going with Ray*’s blood? Huh? Oh s**t!! You’ll have to find out!!

Ren: Stay tuned for Ch.22: My Vampire Heart.






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FullMetal_4lchemist_lover
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 03:54am
rofl Gale!!! haha! you had to see them making out!!! rofl
Hiro: rofl
Me: great chapter bt!!^^
Tim: awww i wana kiss sora!! >.< *makes out with sora*
Flame: stop that >< *pulls him away from sora and ties him to a chair*><i aint got nobody to kiss crying


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 03:55am
Ray*: -- Tim... I am the creator. and You kiss her in Ch.22 -- Got it!!!!!????

The rest: ^^;;;



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 03:58am
Tim: i can't wait that long!!! crying *struggles to get free*
Flame: shut up. be happy you have somebody to kiss! >.< *crosses arms*
Tim: >< SORA!!! crying


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 04:01am
That was so cool! ^^ And Gale............. stare You're disgusted if you see Ray* kssing Ren but your ok with kissing Ty? Unbelievable. stare



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 04:36am
Gale: Uhhhhhhhh.... Yup ^^

Ray*; -- ******** d**k-head -- and thank you, Dani ^^ and Tim............ Don't make me hit you again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 04:52am
Tim: *cries* crying



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 05:05am
Ray*: Cry for all I ******** care --


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 05:16am
stare Not again Tim, you want me to kick you a 3rd time??!!! scream



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 11:20am
Tim: O_O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! crying


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 09:16pm
Ray*: * sighing * -- Tim......... You are pissing me off. Dani. You can by all means, kick the mother ******** --



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 10:04pm
sora:that was really good!!*kisses tim*
ren:hehe ya got tht right
me:hmm what alex was tht me or rays sis?


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 10:07pm
Ray*: Alex* is my Sis. I use the * symbol to tell two ppl apart if they have the same name, Like My beyblade story. Ray & Ray*(me) ^^



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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 11:20pm
Tim: yay!!^^*makes out with sora*
Flame: stare ima kick where the sun dont shine when your done lil bro.
Tim: *ignoring her*
Me: ehh tim is a pervert--;


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 03:16am
Ray*: You can say that again. Kisa is next to me too >.<

Kisa: Ewwwwww....



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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 03:20am
Sven: 0.0 *takes kisa to the kitchen away from the lovers*need something to eat??^^;;;
Tim: *same*^^
Flame: ok thats enough*pulls tim away and kicks his balls*
Tim: O_O crying owie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*falls to knees*


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 03:47am
Good job Flame. ^^



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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 04:02am
Kisa: I'm not hungry >.<

Ray*: Yeah. Awesomeness. Kissing infront of Kisa, Tim!!! How could you!!!


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 04:11am
Tim:*muttering stuff in anger*>.<
Flame: thanx^^
Sven: ehhhh wanna go see my petspiders?



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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 10:00pm
Ray*: You say something, Tim? stare

Kisa: Okay


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 12:21am
Hey Ray*, I think you might have to kick him with your automail. stare



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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 12:49am
Ray*: * grins * Alright...... * bats hold Tim as she kicks Tim where the sun shall never shines with her left leg * --


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 01:00am
Heheheheh. ^^



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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 11:15pm
Tim: HOLY s**t!!!! crying what'd i do!!! crying


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 11:17pm
Ray*: That's for keep pissing me off -- and plus. For mumbbling stuff under your breathe --



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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 02:29am
Tim, you should know better then make Ray* angry. stare


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 11:20pm
Tim: T-T you didnt even know if what i said as good or bad!! crying
Flame: ray?^^ can i break his jaw while soras not looking?-^^-*thinking: twisted *



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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 11:40pm
Ray*: Sure ^^ Be my guest, Flame ^^


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 03:38am
Flame: *puts all her power into her automail and punches him hard in the jaw busting it to bits
Tim: *looks at it and goes outside bleeding*T-T *runs away*
Flame: baby--



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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 04:02am
Ray*: ^^ See, Flame. You n' me are sisters -^^-


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 04:22am
Uhhh, I think you guys over did it....just a little. ^^;;;;



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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 04:34am
Ray*: So? Alex* can always fix his jaw --

Alex*: scream * hits me over teh head * I need to rest to ya know!! I can't be running around, wasting my energy for alchemy all the time!!

Ray*; * tackles my sis * b***h!!!!!

Gale & Jasper: -- --


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 04:54am
stare *sighs*



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commentCommented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 12:34am
Tim: *is gone*T-T
Flame: i know^^ and yes alex does need a rest. healing ppl left and right aint easy for her. she needs time to spend with her boyfriend^^


commentCommented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 12:54am
Alex*: Thank you, Flame ^^

Ray*: stare



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commentCommented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 03:04am
Yuki:...................................

Flame: np sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 03:53am
Alex*: What's wrong, Yuki?



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