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haunted house part 1
as i creep through the shodowy door into the dark grey tinted building, i reminice Joe's comment "bet u aint man enough to go in tat oll house der wit a shotgun!"
what a p***k, and yet i find myself here with two shotguns full of ammo? why do i need to be packing bullets?

!SNAP!

WHAT THE ******** WAS THAT!!!!??

I slowly walk into the apparently living room section of the house as i see a shadowing figure in the corner of the rooom, i fire! but its gone already...."whats the hells up with this house" i whisper to myself quietly.....

"BANG"

if your liking my story then there will be more to come later, i seem to come up with offtopic stories quickly and i dont do rough drafts so excuse me if i didn't spell properly, ill bring u another part soon, this is part 1






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aqua2flare
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 07, 2006 @ 02:36pm
+plz comment and rate each paragraph i wright after reading them
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 07, 2006 @ 02:38pm
plz read and comment and rate on each paragraph of the stories i will wright each week



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Trash-Grem
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 07, 2006 @ 02:54pm
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There Commented! ha!

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