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Regret Mistakes We lie We take We cry We break Pain Thought We gain We're bought We're vein We've sought Why End We cry We begin We lie We send And then... We die Emo or good?

Posted by: Arcana Neon Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:47am

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Inscrutable Andy
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Commented on: Mon Nov 13, 2006 @ 08:47pm


	Lovely. Very nice. A little sad, a little thought-provoking. Very nice Very few syllables, i liked it. I tend to get too wordy, you're very to the point, its an admirable trait. But there were spelling errors. And by errors, I mean one. But yeah. vein. no. its VAIN. Veins are like, for blood. Vain is like that song. "You're so vain, i bet you think this song is about you" Yeah. I love that song See yaz Nii-san

Commented on: Sat Nov 25, 2006 @ 05:01am


	it's really good and very direct. you have a real good rhyme scheme. it's like the circle of life and what is done in life by many. right? why would you ask if it was emo? the point in life is to live and die and saying that is not emo at all (Well in my oppinion) your a real good poet for what i can see. ^_^