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these poems are just ok.
Simply,not to be. (poem)
As I sit staring at the mirror on the wall,

I soon curl-up into a very small ball.

What I see others really do not,

The images of myself make my mind rot.

The thing I saw in the mirror was Frankenstein,

But yet you take the time to call me your valentine.

The things you see in me I do not comprehend,

It even boggles my mind why you’re my friend.

I take this all in very much glee and at heart too,

For as long as you accept me I accept you.

With you by my side I will never “take a fall”,

Count on me, and you will never have your “back against the wall.”

So with this commitment formed recent and anew,

I look in the mirror again and now have a changed view.

No longer do I see Frankenstein or a bad view,

I see what I love, deep in my heart…. I see you.

Now sorry will turn three times fold into bliss,

And from you, it will only take one sweet kiss.

I bury all my emotions and ties into you,

With some patients and time we will work it through.

I take time now and express what you now see,

“For to be without love, is simply not to be.”






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Dark-Witch_Pixy
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 16, 2006 @ 05:28pm
I really love your poems, keep at it, you've got talent.


commentCommented on: Thu Nov 16, 2006 @ 07:21pm
wow thats awesome great work you've got the touch



[Alice-in-Wonderland]
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BettytheGreat
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 17, 2006 @ 07:58pm
Abosolutely great. Deep and heartfelt. Stirring and romantic. I love it.


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 18, 2006 @ 03:32am
Wicked sick, I love it.



Something_Something_Thing
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foosh99
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 19, 2006 @ 04:58am
Heh, your poem is very straight foward. It flows very nicely when you read it out loud.


commentCommented on: Fri Nov 24, 2006 @ 09:04am
hey you. i love this one and i'll always be your biggest fan. heart



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Lips.of.morphine
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 25, 2006 @ 08:20am
Hey you, these are really good I enjoy reading them. You have so much talent don't ever stop writing, you have so much emotions to express and you do it wonderfully.

Loves you,
Michelle


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