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helliansangel0688
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title needed.
redface just a poem that i wrote will i was watching "CMT Giants: Reba". she was talkin about those three words that she very rarely heard from her father, something about it just wasn't the way his generation was. and i thought about my father. how he won't let me go, and grow up. how no matter how happy a special person in my life makes me, he can't seem to see that. cry and honestly, it's not just my father who doesn't get it.
i plan on making it into a song redface , i just need to find a title for the poem. so if u can think of one i would appricate the advice. and plz don't laugh. stare

Release
What will it take,
For you to let me go?
You've raised me well,
It's time to leave though.

Do i need to get pregnant?
Pretend to be with child.
No, i couldn't do it,
Just simply not that wild.

Should i just elope?
What i wanted in the first place.
But i couldn't do it.
You need to see the white lace.

I just need to run away.
Leave and never return.
I should do it.
Just so you would learn.

thanx ArynChris for the title.





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hellian0586
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comment Commented on: Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 08:35pm
lol, baby you really need to stop worrying so much and have a cow and get outta there


comment Commented on: Tue Nov 21, 2006 @ 01:18am
it's getting there... so don't worry so much.



helliansangel0688
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ArynChris
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comment Commented on: Mon Dec 11, 2006 @ 07:15pm
"Release."


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