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Today has been pretty normal. A boy at school I used to like is still around. He keeps threatening to kill himself, as if that makes my life any eaiser. He hasn't recently. That's a plus. I liked a different boy for awhile but I don't any more. I was in my Science, third period class and I wrote something that my half-sister (Not really just to me she is) said was "Deep" I'll copy it and you can tell me what you think. It's from a part in my book. The main character, Rebecca is an orphan, her mother was a literal prostitute and dumped her in an orphanage. She finds a friend in the son of the King of Thieves. Rebecca has no clue who her father is, what's really going to depress her is that in the VERY END, she discovers that her father is none other than the man she's been fighting to destroy. BUT You'll just have to read what I put into my Journal every day to find out won't you? Lmao. Too bad. Well, I'm gonna start from the beginning, and then work my way there. Enjoy.
Rebecca Queen of Thieves

Prologue

Rebecca was thirteen when her mother finally got tired of her. Her mother was a literal traveling prostitute. She has been for the past three years allowing men to rape her and then gets paid for it. (witch with a capital B!) Rebecca finally killed a man as he attempted to rape her. So, her mother got rid of her. Rebecca's mother stared at her own daughter disdainfully as she handed her over to Jim, the old Orphanage Keeper. Rebecca's final words to her mother were, "Rot in hell you filthy whore!" Her mother went to hit her as Rebecca insulted her continously but Jim stopped her. A young man grabbed Rebecca and pulled her out of sight.
"Hey now! Watch that colorful langauge! Around her, that's a good way to get your lights put out." Rebecca noted his short blonde hair, his bright blue eyes, and his lean body. He was maybe fourteen and only a bit taller than her.
"Understand?" She nodded. He lead her up so rickety old steps. He stopped not even a quarter of the way to the first landing.
"NEVER go in there. Melena and Kate are maddened. Leave them alone." He kept going. They stopped at a blue door at the first landing, only the second out of four floors.
"A bunch of sluts are in there. Some of them are bisexual. Stay out of there." Rebecca gulped and stayed right behind him as they went up the stairs.
"This is our room." They went into a large room with many bunk beds. Children sat on the floor. Older kids were in a room in the back, the door was open and Rebecca could see two teens kissing. She grimaced for a moment. Gross She thought.
"Make yourself at home because unless someone wants to adopt you, you're here to stay."

Well thats my prologue. More tomorrow. Ttyl. PLEase- feel free to comment! IT doesnt seem like much but i had to cut some out. Anyway. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!