That is very good.. Seriously, you're a good poet.
Even I couldn't think of anything as good as that, and I write poetry all the time. Oh and my favorite is the third section.
Stevanie Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 12:31am
WOW! I love it!
Demoniiam Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 12:32am
THANK YOU!!!!!! I didn't know it was that good
Shin Maikaru Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 12:34am
Not bad. ^____^
Aizakku Furosto Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 01:25am
Hmm nice is this yours?
NejiHugga757 Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 03:20am
some of it I don't get, but alot of I do get. sorry.
lovesick_wolf Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 03:37am
heart Awwww i loved it!!! ^.^ You're a good poet, hmmm maybe i should post some of my stuff......
x_Poison-Flavored-Love_x Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 04:25am
Its beautiful ^^ i love it. who do you miss that much??
DarkTheTheif Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 07:05am
sad journal
Rakanna Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 11:52am
I think it is really good. I am assumeing you wrote that yourself. Really good job i love poetry.
Sohpia Community Member
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 07:23pm
very nice, but depressing in a way and also romantic. i love ur sense of poetry it matches mines...though i don't like writing poetry much sweatdrop hehehe mrgreen
Exodus2 Community Member
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Tue Dec 12, 2006 @ 06:27pm
its really nice and sad
fionna feather Community Member
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Tue Dec 12, 2006 @ 08:28pm
heartheartheart again totally luv tha style
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can't wait 4 more
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Xx_crimson_butterfly_xX Community Member
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Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 04:39pm
wowzers very breath taking eek
Chaotic Eruption Community Member
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Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 10:01pm
It's great! whee
phoenix7128 Community Member
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Tue Sep 04, 2007 @ 09:59pm
eek now that's a good poem, it's awesome! 3nodding Good job dude