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As elly look at the tall cross in the middle of two other cross "so this is where Jesus died" she said I a quiet voice. "Elly" a young man called she turned to see her older brother "so this is where you were" he said in a nice calm voice "yup I was looking at the cross and reading the bible its a lot better to understand when your standing where it happened" said elly 'if you say so " he said then grabbed her hand and walked away........................(6 years later)............................
Elly stood in the middle of the small town with a book The Bible. She ran to the cross and looked at it as she walked by "not today "elly said to the cross she was heading to the tomb where Jesus had risen from the dead and saved us from all our sins. She sat on a low stone wall that went by the tomb. She walked into the tomb and sat on the place where the body of Jesus had once laid. "Well he surly is no longer here he when to heaven. To prepare a place for us to live when he takes all the believers heaven. At least that’s what the bible says" elly said in a long conversation to her self "that’s right "a beautiful voice said "huh?" elly said as she turned around to see a glowing figure 'your right some day he will come back but till the i guess we'll have to be patent" he said................................................

(To be continued.......)






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Sodatsu
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 14, 2006 @ 07:09pm
very nice but a few spelling errors biggrin


commentCommented on: Fri Dec 15, 2006 @ 01:06am
yeah i tend to do that



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