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Luigi
Luigi wakes up notecing that he in in a sidewalk instead of the alley. He begins to walk home smiling, knowing that he has won his first match. He sees Mario training by himself in their backyard.
"Mario! guess wat?" asks Luigi.
"Wat?" Mario says while doing a backflip.
"I was fighting against a guy, he was really good, and...and i beat him whee " Luigi says happily. Mario stops training and looks at Luigi.
"Yes u did, and you don't have to prove it because i was watching the whole battle." Mario says "You did really good, but u should've seen that he wasn't going his fullest, so you kinda had a handicapped."
"Either way, i beat him which means that i'm getting better, but i still need training, will you train me now." Luigi questions
"Ok, we'll start with a little one on one, hope you can keep up." Mario says.
" eek . You saw me fighting the guy." Luigi says.
"Yes, i was their, why'd u think u were sleeping in the sidewalk." Mario says.
"I thought the allusion finished so i ended up in the sidewalk." Luigi says.
" Well, I brought u to the side walk. Now let's start." Mario says.
After many hours of training, Luigi went to sleep. He now knows that he will have to learn quickly, so he can fight that man again to see if he can kill him.

Well lesse...... I think ima go to da next battle next journal entry, but i may stick with wat's happenin wit Luigi and maybe even talk about wat happened to the assasigner. Well this story's ova (anotha short one) have a nice day and see you next battle. whee xd 3nodding






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Guiney
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commentCommented on: Fri Dec 15, 2006 @ 02:11am
Awesom blossom possom! whee


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 17, 2006 @ 05:06pm
ok much better Luigi has his old mood back. Also, dont just keep going into random battles the readers should get to know some of the characters. Like the mysterious assasin's past and where he went after the fight, etc.



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